It's quite good, an interesting concept using Yoruichi's powers in MHA world, definitely worth your attention at the very least. Writing quality is also pretty good so should definitely give it a try.

oh god...i can't even curse or comment will be deleted but **** ***

The law, Modern Ethics, Some Common Sense, Little bit of Rationality, Slight sense of Sympathy or a small amount of Humanity.

+1

this seems reasonable. +1

the same suggestion for your other MHA fic

Haven't read much but it looks interesting...as for why I am writing this review before reading much. the reason is simple–so damn less views! Now, I don't wanna sound like a smartarse but I think its just common sense. I don't know whether the author deliberately didn't do it or just didn't know. Would suggest a few things: 1. The Name—Change the name of book from "KFP" to "Hololive: Kiara Fried Phoenix" or at least something along those lines. the KFP just isn't helping in any case. 2. The Cover—using a picture of a bunch of holo-idols together or just using a fanart of Kiara would be much better than just having no cover pic. It adds more appeal and people(i) usually don't click on books without a cover. All that out of the way, I love the concept and looking forward to your work.