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Suicide_Maniac
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Haven't read much but it looks interesting...as for why I am writing this review before reading much. the reason is simple–so damn less views! Now, I don't wanna sound like a smartarse but I think its just common sense. I don't know whether the author deliberately didn't do it or just didn't know. Would suggest a few things: 1. The Name—Change the name of book from "KFP" to "Hololive: Kiara Fried Phoenix" or at least something along those lines. the KFP just isn't helping in any case. 2. The Cover—using a picture of a bunch of holo-idols together or just using a fanart of Kiara would be much better than just having no cover pic. It adds more appeal and people(i) usually don't click on books without a cover. All that out of the way, I love the concept and looking forward to your work.

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Kiara Fried Phoenix: A Hololive Story

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Suicide_Maniac
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the same suggestion for your other MHA fic

lightningstormtc
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I’ll definitely take that into consideration. I’m planning on making 3 volumes of KFP, so I might not change the name based on how the other volunes are titled. As for my MHA fic, I was thinking of ordering a commission of Kuro to turn into a cover page, but I might add a cover image for KFP. Thanks for the advice!

Suicide_Maniac:the same suggestion for your other MHA fic