Devil_Riez
world background and update stability get 5 stars cause it's a fanfic but seriously writing quality is like you used Google translate to translate it to English or something. there is shitty character development that there is no character development he just doesn't have a fixed personality he just keeps doing random things, behaves like a rich wuxia youngmaster overall it's shit couldn't read it past Ch 15
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Evaluation: Above Average WQ: Several noticeable gramm errors & inconsistencies, however, author-san is improving on it as it goes on. A well thought storyline, plus long chapters. 4/5 SD: With an average to fast pace development without affecting the story & MC progression. This is a pre-cannon storyline which is quite good as author-san is building his own story. 5/5 CD: MC is not dependent (Mythical Zoan/logia lightning/Fenrir) on his DF as he also uses his foreknowledge of OP-verse plus his high intelect and out of the box strats' which help him overcome the schemes and plot of OP-verse. MC has a chaotic-neutral persona which is apt on OP-verse. 5/5 US: Author-san must've encountered the well known disease of a mental/writer's block. 3/5 WB: Different DF were used/discussed which is good. Lack of adventure/exploration of other islands. 4/5 Don't be discouraged by the reviews but take it as a challenge to do better. Kudos to author-san and well wishes! xD