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You know, I like your story, but it feels like there’s no direction where it’s going (including the hero), there’s a lack of intention or something. The guy just loots the gacha so as not to die. And there the problems themselves find him. Or he lacks an antagonist (obstacles on the way)
I don’t argue that Kise is the strongest, but only for a short distance. If he uses p/copy and the zone will merge in 1 quarter. Midorima can throw the entire game. That's why I say if in the original Midorima had used the zone, he would have taken out all the players.
I think it’s too early to give him a new template, he will become too imposing and you will be faced with a situation where you can realize his abilities and skills, otherwise they will be just tinsel, candy nothing more. And I have an idea, let him begin with each template and new techniques the essence of the cursed energy, which will allow him to go beyond the boundaries of the previous owners. After all, having the knowledge and experience of various magicians and curses, he grows not only quantitatively but also qualitatively
The author, I understand that Akashi will win because it is necessary for the plot, because Kazama should give him a kick, but if I judge, I think Midorima is the strongest player in the generation of miracles, because he is already a monster with his throws and height and other parameters may not be strong, but at a good level and when he is in the zone, he is a shooting machine and no one can stop him. I think that’s why in the original the author didn’t allow Midorima to enter the zone because he would have simply destroyed everyone. What I mean is let Midorima win 1v1 against Akashi but lose the game, and this will be a plus and for Akashi he will grow as a person and awaken his true potential against Kazama))