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Jormungandr's calamity
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Hello it's your dear author I will explain you the world. So I want to write a story with most of the mythological monster with monster that I will create and for my character I will let him stay in his egg for two or three chapters because I don't want my story to be too fast. If you like the story don't forget to write a comment and a review. I will try to write seven chapters per week or 5 if I don't have a lot of time.
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Bad grammar, I know author isn't a native english speaker but that doesn't change the fact that it's bad grammar, the dialogue is artificial and robotic with no "" to tell when a character is talking. I'd put stability of updates at 4/5 stars but if I did then my total score wouldn't represent what I think of the story. I can't comment on the story a lot since I've only read 3 chapters (that was enough for me to stop) but there's something off about it. Characters so far are quite flat. World background is, I'm guessing, mostly from north mythology with maybe some things the author adds in himself. He also abruptly gets a system. Overall, it's pretty bad but if the author polishes his english, and stops writing character interactions and dialogues like he is right now then I see potential.
Good story you have there... Although beast type Mc limit the plot building abit and less character due to "Eat of be eaten" principle, but I have hope in this... Still awaiting until he truly unlock the bloodline potential.. Hope author could throw in some of his creative brain juice to his original ability..
The story takes a whole new turn in stating mythological creatures. The first chapter I've read is great and very informative. Good dialogue and very inhumane personality for the 2 giant snakes (which is to be expected since they are snakes). Thank you author for making this series! I would totally recommend this to anyone who likes fiction!
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