Review Detail of Vitor_Gamer_Br in Jormungandr's calamity

Thank you for the five star and could you tell me what did you find good and bad in the story so I could upgrade my writing skills. And if you like don't forget to use power stone.

the only thing I didn't like about your story is to give mc a human form

I don't understand, you want him to have a human form or you don't him to have a human form ?

that he doesn't have a human form, sorry I don't understand English very well

Ok and we don’t know maybe when the story will be more advance he will get a human form.