Review Detail of Hati_3317 in Jormungandr's calamity

Bad grammar, I know author isn't a native english speaker but that doesn't change the fact that it's bad grammar, the dialogue is artificial and robotic with no "" to tell when a character is talking. I'd put stability of updates at 4/5 stars but if I did then my total score wouldn't represent what I think of the story. I can't comment on the story a lot since I've only read 3 chapters (that was enough for me to stop) but there's something off about it. Characters so far are quite flat. World background is, I'm guessing, mostly from north mythology with maybe some things the author adds in himself. He also abruptly gets a system. Overall, it's pretty bad but if the author polishes his english, and stops writing character interactions and dialogues like he is right now then I see potential.