Reviews of JoJo's Stone World (Dropped)
JoJo's Stone World (Dropped)
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I would say read it only if he jojo fan or like comedy. this fanfic although may have plot line, it is full of plotholes. character development is zero(although author tries hard to create some character development). MC despite being said by author in being not dense is in fact dense and extremely naive for no reason other than plot and female MC is annoying and there has been zero character development for her or MC in whole volume . other than that MC character is all over the place. he should have a stronger will than author shows him to have and literally everyone else other than him is fighting genius. world development 5/5 story development 4/5 (considering that. it's comedy and slice of life story) character development 1/5 (MC and FC personality are like they didn't even use internet for once in their lives and are illogically immature despite being said to be mature .) update stability 5/5 world background 5/5 ( no matter how much I hate the way author just keep adding oc or concepts to make antagonists strong, at least he does it in a way that story does not go shit and he somehow make it balanced with the storyline) in summary, this story is comedy and slice of life story so don't expect a good and serious storyline. for character design I will say that author does not know how to keep it stable( he should not mention something about a character and than for plot purposes , ignore it.) other character development problems could be ignored as author is new and at least still tries to make effort in character development. for world background, author clearly put a lot of work and time to adjust it in a way that it does not feel forced despite being a crossover.
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First of all, I would like to thank you for your novels, namely for the fact that it is not a stupid fulfillment of desires "with too smart" MC who either runs after the harem or asks to become like Fan Yun, really now MC hit a man very little especially when there is cultivation and the like. in the second dawn there are no normal fan fiction by Jojo and Dr. Stone. jojo with its steads and pathos is not an easy choice for fan fiction, you could say I saw that it became the second after Sunday Bizarre Adventure and the rest is just a parody or system of gadgets with MHA. Dr. Stone, to be honest this is the first fanfiction not "Senku x Kohaku". I won't say anything about the parasite because I haven't really shown anything. Thirdly, as I said, your characters are really similar to people, but sometimes tense. P.s: sorry for my english
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