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Elijah is ancient Hebrew: "fortress, impregnability" and "Yahweh is my God." Athanasius (Athanasius, Athanasius, Athanasius) - Greek: "immortality". Boris - Slavic: "fighter". Bulat - Turkic: "strong, steel, rod". Victor (Victorin, Victoria) - Latin: "winner", "wins all Wilhelm" - Old German: "knight". Vyacheslav (Vaclav, Wenceslaus) - Slavic: "great, glorious" Gustav - German: "military adviser". Dobrynya is a Slavic name meaning "good, clever" (I weigh this best name from the list)
I do not know how everyone but I think that you need to slow down and make the plot smoother, although it has a line of logic and character development, but now everything looks like I poured a bucket of hungry water on my head I think it would be nice if you added a character for a third party in POV Reiji and Asami, like an ordinary worker who found himself between super people and super problems to open their new side and make it clearer
Bara Bara no Mi I think it will be a more interesting choice than just khaki or body hardening magic it could give it more mobility and versatility for example send your eye to watch the enemy or hand quality whistle paw from hundreds of meters with a layer of reaping harvested to the extreme, I want to remind every day in anime was very slow you can go further and give it not just a way to share yourself more and increased control over the body that already exists already opens up great opportunities
Yes yes it is very nice to have you and your kids to be able with you to do it and I don’t think I have any money for that and you can get me some stuff to make you want you can get a little bit more and you get the rest of the things I want you to have to do that and I want you to be a good person and you have no
First of all, I would like to thank you for your novels, namely for the fact that it is not a stupid fulfillment of desires "with too smart" MC who either runs after the harem or asks to become like Fan Yun, really now MC hit a man very little especially when there is cultivation and the like. in the second dawn there are no normal fan fiction by Jojo and Dr. Stone. jojo with its steads and pathos is not an easy choice for fan fiction, you could say I saw that it became the second after Sunday Bizarre Adventure and the rest is just a parody or system of gadgets with MHA. Dr. Stone, to be honest this is the first fanfiction not "Senku x Kohaku". I won't say anything about the parasite because I haven't really shown anything. Thirdly, as I said, your characters are really similar to people, but sometimes tense. P.s: sorry for my english
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