Reviews of Itachi Uchiha in Arrowverse
Itachi Uchiha in Arrowverse
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Writing Quality -3 Stars Story Development - 3 Stars Character Design - 1 Star Updating Stability - 1 Star World Background - 2 Stats Writing Quality [ It isn't really a great read, quality wise, but it is understandable and that's the most you can expect on Webnovel...so.. yeah ] Story Development [ There are only 5 Chapters at date so I don't know where this is going and what to expect ...but I just give 3 Stars because there is a lot of potential of it having a good Story Development ] Character Design [ Straigth forward.....this isn't itachi at all. If you want to read it ..just imagine a random guy with itachi's powers because otherwise you just get frustated that the Mc isn't acting like Itachi at all ] Updating Stability [ There isn't much to say to this ....5 Chapters in 1 month ] World Background [ I don't Think that the Author has much knowledge about DC and I expect many errors in Details] An [ English isn't my mother language so ....I hope it is understandable and I don't prove read what I write ..so If there are any grammar mistakes .....chill your beans ]
Welp this fan fic has single handedly made me not want to even think about reading an itachi uchiha fan fic due to the fact that I realized these fan fics always change his character completely changed and in general doesn't fit his character. Itachi sacrificed everything for Sasuke his child hood his family and his legacy. Then he goes to another world and just never worries about him or tries to get back no he just chills in the other world and it just doesn't fit him. Also I highly doubt he would care about putting someone under a genjutsu like he did with supergirl as he killed so many innocents even if he had a peace loving nature. Also I personally just find it really unrealistic that he would even interact with these supposed heroes due to the fact as a child he witnessed the world watching how he helped someone but then that person tried to kill him and all the drastic measures he took to make some sort of peace he definitely wouldn't believe in something like heroes. Then he just suddenly starts apologizing for the genjutsu on supergirl even though he tortured his captain someone he was kinda close to for days in a genjutsu. This just doesn't fit Itachi it seems more like you just decided to gave a random person itach's powers and placed him in the world more than anything. If you were gonna make Itachi well not seem like itachi in anyway why make him Itachi in the first place just get some random person and throw him in the DC verse with Itachi's powers.
Writing Quality 2* I gave it two only because this isn't the worst writing I've seen it's just bad Story Development 1* Would give zero if possible literally no development like at all you could argue that there are only 8 chapters but I've seen more development in a paragraph Character Design 1* I'd love to give this 0* the author might as well wrote that some virgin loser who has never seen a girl before died and reincarnated with itachi's body and powers. Itachi flustered at the sight of super girl? Itachi interfering when it doesn't concern him? he'll he is even wanted at that time. And doing stuff that only someone with 10 IQ would do. Need cloths to not stand out? Will he use transformation jutsu? steal cloths? No he will make the 3 IQ move of trading his Akatsuki ring which is the only thing he has capable of possibly communicating with his home. Updating Stability 1* It's really bad but the author has school so it's understandable doesn't change the rating though. World Background 1* Would give this 0.5* The author has what seems to be no knowledge of naruto and little knowledge of DC Instead of using a transformation jutsu Itachi buys cloths using his ring (yes the one the akatsuki use to communicate) and the fact that this mc is nothing like itachi (I ranted above). His lack of knowledge shows again when itachi uses the Mangyekō on random street thugs… Yeah… He also blushes and goes into a daze when he sees supergirl for the first time. 🙄🤦🏾♂️ All I'll say is that if you're here to read about Itachi then turn away my description of the mc above is accurate not at all itachi. Hopefully the author isn't one of those guys who can't take mere criticism and let's this honest review (warning) remain
The rating changed from 2/5 to 1/5 because this dude is literally not itachi lol first he puts supergirl in an awful genjutsu that he wouldnt have done to someone he just met and was innocent... then he tries ti buy clothes but has no money so what does this itachi do? Does he not just take them? NOPE. He gives the cashier his most precious item his ring and after almost every comment bashing that the author tries to fix it by forcing some unnecessary bs that the cashier sold this ring for $5000 lol and what does he do? Nothing just buys new clothes lol this story is EASILY the WORST “Itachi” fanfic i have ever read
