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Traps_Are_Gay
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Writing Quality 2* I gave it two only because this isn't the worst writing I've seen it's just bad Story Development 1* Would give zero if possible literally no development like at all you could argue that there are only 8 chapters but I've seen more development in a paragraph Character Design 1* I'd love to give this 0* the author might as well wrote that some virgin loser who has never seen a girl before died and reincarnated with itachi's body and powers. Itachi flustered at the sight of super girl? Itachi interfering when it doesn't concern him? he'll he is even wanted at that time. And doing stuff that only someone with 10 IQ would do. Need cloths to not stand out? Will he use transformation jutsu? steal cloths? No he will make the 3 IQ move of trading his Akatsuki ring which is the only thing he has capable of possibly communicating with his home. Updating Stability 1* It's really bad but the author has school so it's understandable doesn't change the rating though. World Background 1* Would give this 0.5* The author has what seems to be no knowledge of naruto and little knowledge of DC Instead of using a transformation jutsu Itachi buys cloths using his ring (yes the one the akatsuki use to communicate) and the fact that this mc is nothing like itachi (I ranted above). His lack of knowledge shows again when itachi uses the Mangyekō on random street thugs… Yeah… He also blushes and goes into a daze when he sees supergirl for the first time. 🙄🤦🏾‍♂️ All I'll say is that if you're here to read about Itachi then turn away my description of the mc above is accurate not at all itachi. Hopefully the author isn't one of those guys who can't take mere criticism and let's this honest review (warning) remain

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Traps_Are_Gay
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for those wondering besides sentimental value itachi's Akatsuki ring is capable of communication with other members so him giving it away is a nono and before you say "he's in another world" he never tried just gave it away

Dragon_5081
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Idk it just seems the author decided to put a cliche mc with itachi's powers into the world rather than actually inserting Itachi. I personally don't believe he should've inserted Itachi since he didn't even try to match his character.