BaeVida
The story is engaging right from the start. There's a very clear depiction of the worlds (contemporary and fantasy) and the characters. The readers would be able to relate easily. I must say it is really quite interesting. I like it how it is written. Gets me excited to know what's going to happen next. Great work, Author! Two thumbs up.
I have read the author's previous book, Astrid- The hybrid princess and I can say that the author is good at writing stories in this genre. The story, the character development, and the dialogue is nicely written. The writing style is good with almost no errors. My only suggestion for the author is to give descriptive details in the scenes, like how the characters look and what is happening in the scene rather than using more of dialogs. Otherwise, this book is good. Keep up the good work author.
Nice. I love your synopsis and cover. The plotline is great in itself. I also love how author started with a thrilling dream. I do not wish to be the fl right now. To think she has been plagued with these kind of dreams all her life... Wow. Nice character development, world background, story development and good update stability... Author needs to do some editing on the work, because of typos and some grammatical errors and reduce the amount of lines per para... For easier read. But other than that... This book is good to go. I have read author's contracted book and I love that one has well. I think author does great with fantasy. Thanks for this work. You have my support all the way.
Alright, so oread both pre-change and then change and my mind was blown. The first version was somewhat slow and not very story like but then the author had to bring their "A" game and just captivate the reader from start to finish. Though the transition of speech to action is a little sloppy, if the author could find a way to mix the POVs together to make it flow smother it would be amazing however it still makes a good read. The characters are spectacular for first introductions and the world is still developing. Give it chance đđđ