Review Detail of Scarlettbunny in Isabel: The Lightning Princess

Alright, so oread both pre-change and then change and my mind was blown. The first version was somewhat slow and not very story like but then the author had to bring their "A" game and just captivate the reader from start to finish. Though the transition of speech to action is a little sloppy, if the author could find a way to mix the POVs together to make it flow smother it would be amazing however it still makes a good read. The characters are spectacular for first introductions and the world is still developing. Give it chance 😄😄😄