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is on rewrite..............
Red_Noodles
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It's a really interesting story has a new approach to self insert character looking forward to read it. Keep up the good work.
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Hmm, I am caught up with the chapters, ignore the reading status. What to say and how to say it? This is a great story that is worth reading. I can guarantee that much. Now to go into the details: The story starts with the protagonist reincarnating as Wolverine's and Sabertooth's brother before they kill their dad. The setting is well-established and written to flow nicely. There is no jarring change in atmosphere or the mood of the story at any point without reasons - as far as I can identify. The writing quality is good. There are both spelling and grammatical mistakes which sometimes do distract from reading pleasure, but not to the extent where every sentence is a hurdle. The story development is fantastic! Of course, there is room for improvement (always). So far, I am happy with the direction the story is taking. The plot is made with good reasoning and the author appears to have researched the plot of Marvel/DC/Underworld stories well. The characters are very enjoyable. Each of them have depth of their own and interact with each other differently. The author has made the characters in such a fashion that none of them are dumb, but neither are they clever. Well, except for the protagonist. HOWEVER, that is okay because so far he got nothing else except his intelligence to show off. It should be noted that the author does fall into the trap of making the side-kicks look dumb to make the hero look bodacious-ly clever. Only a couple of times, as of yet. Another thing I noticed is that whenever the protagonist speaks of his plans, the contribution his allies can give is muted or not given enough focus. Other than that, each of the characters are developed nicely. Enough focus is given to them individually to make them seem alive and coherent. So kudos to the author, well done with the side characters because they are often overlooked by fanfic writers. Overall, this is a great read and the author is doing a great job. Thanks for that. We will see again in another 40 chapters.
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Story is done very well as the story starts very early in the marvel timeline, the author needs no be smart what they show and how much to time skip, which the author has done perfectly as of ch37 it has shown the general story and character relations but left some details only hinted at. This stops the whole bit where in novels characters almost narrate the entirety of each otherβs lifeβs. The story so far has focused heavily on the transported businessman as he is the unique character to the story in its now early timeline and due to that he is the centre of all effected events in the world, but the author has said they are thinking of doing POVβs of other characters in their own arcs, it could make a good story but personally there is so much content out their already about all the marvel characters I would not care much for it, but as it has not happened yet I will rate it 5stars and when it changes make a new review. TLDR great story, well written character interactions, good action and interesting timeline. But a little fear of a small future possibility.
This so damn good. Why can I not stop reading this!! But why is it so good? Well this author has created a connection between different universes, yet still kept a simple and interesting plot. He is not throwing everything into this plot, but rather allowing a continuous build-up. The author has also done a great job regarding character development, he is laying the foundation for characters rather than creating unstable bases as seen in other stories. This is what makes this such a great story, along with other factors of course. Keep up the good work
I love the story but is the mc going to get stronger or will he always be a shield and try to use things like lex to get more power and then still get beat seeing a mc do toe to toe with Superman is what I was looking for not a I need ppl around me to protect me either way the strong is good I never liked the my women are there to protect not saying they shouldnβt be strong like the Kryptonian emperor fanfic his women are all strong but he still can Fight and protect his self but keep up the good work
