Review Detail of Leonard1153 in is on rewrite..............

Hmm, I am caught up with the chapters, ignore the reading status. What to say and how to say it? This is a great story that is worth reading. I can guarantee that much. Now to go into the details: The story starts with the protagonist reincarnating as Wolverine's and Sabertooth's brother before they kill their dad. The setting is well-established and written to flow nicely. There is no jarring change in atmosphere or the mood of the story at any point without reasons - as far as I can identify. The writing quality is good. There are both spelling and grammatical mistakes which sometimes do distract from reading pleasure, but not to the extent where every sentence is a hurdle. The story development is fantastic! Of course, there is room for improvement (always). So far, I am happy with the direction the story is taking. The plot is made with good reasoning and the author appears to have researched the plot of Marvel/DC/Underworld stories well. The characters are very enjoyable. Each of them have depth of their own and interact with each other differently. The author has made the characters in such a fashion that none of them are dumb, but neither are they clever. Well, except for the protagonist. HOWEVER, that is okay because so far he got nothing else except his intelligence to show off. It should be noted that the author does fall into the trap of making the side-kicks look dumb to make the hero look bodacious-ly clever. Only a couple of times, as of yet. Another thing I noticed is that whenever the protagonist speaks of his plans, the contribution his allies can give is muted or not given enough focus. Other than that, each of the characters are developed nicely. Enough focus is given to them individually to make them seem alive and coherent. So kudos to the author, well done with the side characters because they are often overlooked by fanfic writers. Overall, this is a great read and the author is doing a great job. Thanks for that. We will see again in another 40 chapters.