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Overall, this is good fanfic. Yeah someone maybe say the MC is too op in begining. But let me say something. He almost not using his power until this point. He just train and train. He fucking train demon. He just don't want have high LV without good basic. He learn basic sword style, He train his body, and train his magic (lol the real 'basic' magic fireball and it really just a ball of fire) so He not just op from start. Next for Chara develop in this fanfic, yeah it bit too fast for falling but they have good alibi for it so acceptable for me. For upload stability, this fanfic almost daily upload so it 5 star. For story' it just begining and story develop around his training sesaon and his daily life. For world building, this fanfic so it not really important i think almost every reader already know about this world.
Consider these worlds: - "·strike the blood·" = (https://strike-the-blood.fandom.com/wiki/La_Folia_Rihavein). - ·Shinmai Maō no Keiyakusha· = (https://shinmaimaou.fandom.com/wiki/Mio_Naruse). - fairi tail = (https://fairytail.fandom.com/es/wiki/Ultear_Milkovich),(https://fairytail.fandom.com/wiki/Irene_Belserion). - naruto = kushina uzumaki and mikoto uchiha ,(https://naruto.fandom.com/wiki/Konan). - bleach = (https://bleach.fandom.com/wiki/Rukia_Kuchiki). - shakugan no shana = (https://shakugan.fandom.com/wiki/Shana). - one piece = (https://onepiece.fandom.com/wiki/Boa_Hancock). - fate stay nigh = (https://typemoon.fandom.com/wiki/Saber_(Fate/stay_night)). - Rosario + Vampire = (https://rosariovampire.fandom.com/wiki/Moka_Akashiya). - soul eater = (https://souleater.fandom.com/wiki/Maka_Albarn). - nanatsu no Tazai = 'gelda' , (https://nanatsu-no-taizai.fandom.com/wiki/Merlin). - hischold of the dead = shisuka , saya ,(https://hotd.fandom.com/wiki/Saeko_Busujima) - damanchi = (https://danmachi.fandom.com/wiki/Ais_Wallenstein). - shingeki no kyojin = (https://shingeki-no-kyojin.fandom.com/wiki/Mikasa_Ackerman). - "Mahouka Koukou no Rettousei"= (https://mahouka-koukou-no-rettousei.fandom.com/es/wiki/Shiba_Miyuki). - "·TO LOVE RU·" = (https://toloveru.fandom.com/es/wiki/Lala_Satalin_Deviluke) , (https://toloveru.fandom.com/es/wiki/Momo_Belia_Deviluke). -"·Date a live·" = (https://date-a-live.fandom.com/wiki/Category:Characters). -·Trinity Seven· = (https://trinity-seven.fandom.com/es/wiki/Lilith_Asami). -·Infinite Stratos·= (https://infinitestratos.fandom.com/es/wiki/Wiki_Infinite_Stratos). -·Sword Art Online·= (https://swordartonline.fandom.com/es/wiki/Wiki_Sword_Art_Online). -·Campione!·= (https://thecampione.fandom.com/wiki/Campione!_Wiki). -·Dungeon ni Deai wo Motomeru no wa Machigatteiru ni Darou ka· = (https://danmachi.fandom.com/es/wiki/DanMachi_Wiki). -"·Sekirey·"= (https://sekirei.fandom.com/es/wiki/Sekirei). -·Seirei tsukai no blade dance· = (https://seirei-tsukai-no-blade-dance.fandom.com/es/wiki/Restia_Ashdoll). -(https://listas.20minutos.es/lista/mejores-animes-harem-388933/). etc
At first chapter or prologue, it's really bad because the dialogue format, you choose something like that and I'm quite happy when you did change it to more suits and better format. The reason why it's bad because seems someone can't understand what the heck is going on with the story itself and the dialogue (again), made me hard to undertstand. I know it's silly to review it when still in chapter 4 but I just want author can get better rather than *****ing around. I hope this can surpass Danmachi Einlion ver.