Review Detail of TetekGede in Is It Wrong to get Love in the Dungeon?

At first chapter or prologue, it's really bad because the dialogue format, you choose something like that and I'm quite happy when you did change it to more suits and better format. The reason why it's bad because seems someone can't understand what the heck is going on with the story itself and the dialogue (again), made me hard to undertstand. I know it's silly to review it when still in chapter 4 but I just want author can get better rather than *****ing around. I hope this can surpass Danmachi Einlion ver.