SharpJester
They always say: don't judge the book by its cover Its the same as this one. It has a unique approach that needs a lot of patience for you to uncover the truth. Though you really need to wait for more chapters since this Author is quite cruel and mean when it comes to torturing its readers. Read this when you have a lot of free time. I suggest you read it thoroughly!
Hi this is Brandon gould I just read your chapters 195 to the most current one and I like where your story is going. I do have a question if there where 24 residents and 10 died Where are the other 14 did they escape before the complex was overcome with the unknown virus,creature or whatever I hope that you continue down this storyline it reminds me of Fallout 3 in at least in this chapter, if when they escape and you want to continue with post apocalyptic that might work But these are suggestions Keep up the good work
Your story has extremely The Martian vibes, and I loved it from what I started reading. I liked how the chapters weren't too long with loads of information crammed in and that there was some definite suspense. The only thing I gave four stars on was the character design and only because the beginning was more focused on the plot development.
I like this log thing, its kinds light weight work out for a bored brain, haha, seriously. But I have questions, why early chapters are super short, you could have frame them in the scenes of a chapter, why there are eldless spaces between the words? Just take it as my frustration as a writer, the story itself is great, nothing else matter. Goodluck author
Hi this is Brandon Gould i am the Writer of the Book Demonsong and i am responding to a request for a review swap. i will give a review on your book if you give a review on mine. I really enjoy this type of syle you have created for your book. It makes me feel like I am the person and it gives me a real feeling that he is slowly lossing his mind and sannity to this infection. I am also invested on what the outside world might be, is it all in his head or has the world been destoryed.
This is a very unique piece. I didn't even have to read the next story's description, I already liked this one. Now for the idea, it's really refreshing. A break from the CEO romances (which I love ;_;). Grammar looks good too. Update stability, idk because it already has a lotta chapters. Keep up the good work!
Are you trying to write creepypasta? I like the idea, but the amount of mistakes in each log... Is painful. They are super short, and somehow the release rate suffers... Yea. You have a 5 đ story potential here, if you edit everything, and release at least a "chapter" a day. Anyway good luck with it.
This review is part of a swap Well the first thing that I would like to say is that the story is unique. Well too different from others that I read. The writing quality is good. As of chapter 25 the story is going well. The thoughts in the logs are well explained. It looks cool how it is developing. But on the downside, I can't seem to understand much of rhe the plots. Well it just seems some rantings of some beings designed to protect something. I don't wanna give any spoilers so I will not dwelve deeper into this. The chapters are short, but they do feel unique. I can see this story may develop great. Well although this is not my cup of tea, I think the readers of this genre will like the mystery in the story. Keep up the good work. And good luck
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