Review Detail of VateRise in Input Log Dates
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Are you trying to write creepypasta? I like the idea, but the amount of mistakes in each log... Is painful. They are super short, and somehow the release rate suffers... Yea. You have a 5 đ story potential here, if you edit everything, and release at least a "chapter" a day. Anyway good luck with it.
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SharpJester
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Thank you alot for the review! I will admit the earlier chapters do have a lot of unnecessary mistakes, especially since I was trying to emulate what a glitched computer log looks like, but I assure you the 'glitches' are less prominent within the other volumes if you're willing to try. (each volume is it's own story after all) regardless, I'll be sure to up the release schedule once I am less busy with both work and school. once again, thank you for the honest review.
In that case, I will review it later, and read more. If as you say the quality is better, then I will change my score.
SharpJester:Thank you alot for the review! I will admit the earlier chapters do have a lot of unnecessary mistakes, especially since I was trying to emulate what a glitched computer log looks like, but I assure you the 'glitches' are less prominent within the other volumes if you're willing to try. (each volume is it's own story after all) regardless, I'll be sure to up the release schedule once I am less busy with both work and school. once again, thank you for the honest review.