Review Detail of _Sha in Input Log Dates

Item: Input Log Dates
Rating: 4.6

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_ShaLv104yr_Sha

I like this log thing, its kinds light weight work out for a bored brain, haha, seriously. But I have questions, why early chapters are super short, you could have frame them in the scenes of a chapter, why there are eldless spaces between the words? Just take it as my frustration as a writer, the story itself is great, nothing else matter. Goodluck author

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SharpJester

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SharpJesterAuthorSharpJester

Thank you for reading and reviewing! The earlier chapters were mainly experimentation for this new type of story. So I will agree there are an over abundance of errors in the writing (I tried to go for a 'computer glitch' effect). It does get better in the other volumes if you'd like to give them a try!

4yr

_ShaLv10_Sha

As expected of a great writer, you always improve.

SharpJester:Thank you for reading and reviewing! The earlier chapters were mainly experimentation for this new type of story. So I will agree there are an over abundance of errors in the writing (I tried to go for a 'computer glitch' effect). It does get better in the other volumes if you'd like to give them a try!

4yr