Maryixxx
This novel portrays about the harsh realities of life. It speaks about the truth and tells the exact happenings in the real world. This book is filled with lessons. The main character teaches the reader to how to follow their dreams despite of circumstances. I'm inspired by this book. This book is full of potential. Please keep writing and inspire your readers! Salamat!ššššššš
Okay! So far! It was quite good at the start but suddenly I felt lost due to some grammatical errors or maybe I missed some indicators. There were suprise appearances from random characters but so far it was good. Please donāt take any offense from what I said. Over time youāll improve! Iām not the best but Iāll keep supporting you. More motivation for you author! I like the story!
The story has an excellent plot, an uncommon one in this website. There are no misspelled words or terms, and the writing is created uniquely. One thing I love about the book is how the author portrays the characters. You can really feel them, and somehow imagine how they look like thanks to the author's vivid descriptions. Quite exciting, this book is and it has a smooth pace so far since I've currently read ten chapters. Character Development, nothing to complain about this category either. As for the stability of updates, I'll just assume that you update everyday haha! Anyways author, you've done a good job and it is obvious to me that you have put a lot of effort into this. Keep up the good work! As for grammar, I'm bad at it too so I have no right to judge yours. Anyways! Keep writing!
Yeet!!! Just from the start It was already portrayed the main character's goal!!! Another yeet for you!!! Bullying is something I hate too, I was never bullied myself, but my friend was and It's really a sad past from me. But nah, who cares about my past anyways. Story Development was done nicely, not fast nor slow. Sophie's character is something all of us can relate to! You have a nice book so keep up the good work
ok, let me collect my though. So the story is well written you can feel the emotion of the character how their life goes 180. I don,t like to see innocent people get bullied, etc. If this happened in my novel then the outcome will be a bloodbath. I hope that girl achieve something in her life. But it is realistic about the people in today's world as most people care about only their money and reputation. To writer => It's the well-written story that can easily say 9.3 out of 10. I did,t notice a major flaw and it truly is well written because you feel bad for the girl and want the things to improve for her. Overall It is great.
Omg, this story is such a gem! I feel immense compassion for Sophie but I belive she will grow strong stand against who bully her and I hope the ML will support her in this fight. And looking forward to more character development and the blooming love story. Thank you for writing this story author loved it truely.
This has a nostalgic middles school vibes. I like it! Bullying must never be tolerated. I wish to see Sophie standing up to the bullies herself, instead of a knight in shining armor always doing the work. Go Sophie! I feel like you could work more on your grammar? I think it will be easy for you! Your work is going to look better :) Also, the abrupt changes in POV is quite confusing? For some reason, maybe I'm just stupid. Sorry! I want to see Sophie's character to develop and also her synergy with the ML! Please continue writing! You are a fantastic author!
This story is very emotional and a first of its kind(I believe) on webnovel. The author has written the plot in a simple and clear way. But sometimes it becomes confusing when there is a change in the POV. Make the scenes a little slow and elaborate it more, if possible. Otherwise, the concept chosen for the story is mindblowing. Keep up the good work author.