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In The Abyss As A Toon Character

After dying, I learned there was nothing on the other side. The only thing that awaits me is emptiness, with nothing to keep me company but my thoughts. ...by a sheer stroke of luck, fate gave me an opportunity. Another chance was granted to me, and I wouldn't let it slip away. Even if I am just a mere "show" of whatever sent me here, I will strive to make the best shot with every fiber of my being... ¿¿¿even if I need to turn into an MLP character??? (Disclaimer: Don't expect something good; it's decent at best, unlike you really like his ability, English isn't my first language, and it is my first time writing, I do it for fun, " so yeah this is my journey into learning how to write a novel, the first chapters are going to be bad but But they get better and better As I learn ALSO! this novel contains HIGH LEVELS OF MY LITTLE PONY!) Note 2 You can read my review and understand the theme of the novel/fanfic quickly

HeyItsMrOof · Anime & Comics
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Chapter 04 End

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Dante POV

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The sound of jagged, short breaths can be heard.

*Huff...*

Dante can see how he's trying to laugh, but only faint cries can be heard until finally, it stops

I just killed someone...

Dante is shaking from the feeling of taking a life, he is not someone with a loose screw, technically speaking he is just an average human

NO, YOU CAN'T THINK LIKE THAT, YOU WILL KILL MORE PEOPLE FROM ONWARDS

...

I-I'll repent on the other side, I will have a lot of time to spare "a lot"...

Before Dante could convince himself, a feeling brought him back to the world

Ouch... it hurts!

All my body aches ¿was the transformation?

The pain is worse in my front "arm" The wound was a bit deep but that should be normal

Looking at the corpse, the feeling of being on the edge of death doesn't disappear at all.

I was too naive, if not for my ability, we would be in different positions

After calming down, my breathing stops being agitated and sounds more normal

I have to be more careful now on

The pain grows even more as I calm down.

It's most likely the adrenaline that just left my body or something similar, now that I pay more attention

...

This is not my arm... Dante stopped looking at the corpse, redirecting his gaze to himself, the more that he looked at it, the more sure he was, that he had some hooves or paws

I'm standing on 4 legs...

WHAT THE FUCK AM I? Panic invades me

My face doesn't know which expression to show. Wait, do I even have a face?

I touch my face with my "paws" and feel something fluffy and soft.

Fur... Snow-white fur to be exactly

After touching it, I realized that my paws were more rigid on the insole and sticky as if they were meant to grab something.

Many questions come up, but the main question is, what the heck am I?

Rambling inside, The Reason why I am here struck me: THE TUTORIAL, Daniel and Magnus! I have to go help them

My legs start to move as fast as they can, only to stumble a few seconds later

My face slammed against the floor, getting some mud all over me.

"Ugh..."

I feel slightly disgusted at seeing my fur dirty and the smell it gives off, The anxiety to clean it fills me.

I don't like it not even a bit. Dante starts to question, Since when did he have an OCD

After a few attempts, I learned how to run It's a little strange to walk on 4 legs. It's not as odd as I imagined, but it's still "different"

After a short time, Dante arrived where he had seen the last time the player with the broken foot

.

Arriving at the scene, the first thing that greets me is Daniel standing over the body of an enemy player

By his looks, he is about to collapse at any moment

The moment his eyes see me, he grabs his weapon and tries to get into a combat position. I say "attempt" because he looks like a mother rabbit trying to look threatening in front of a snake

I walk closer to him so that he can hear me well.

"It's me da-"

Before I finished speaking, A shout of fright comes out of my mouth

"MY VOICE!!! WHAT HAPPENED TO MY VOICE????" "WHY DO I SOUND LIKE THAT!"

...

In the midst of my shock, I remember the reason I came here. Those things can wait, The World will not end because my voice sounds different.

While all my drama happens, Daniel remains vigilant, keeping his guard high

Right, first things first, remember why you're here, Dante turns his head from side to side quickly to clear his head

*cough* "umm... Daniel, it's me... Dante!", damn it that sounded too un-natural I need to get to this voice

Daniel: "Really? As far as I remember, he wasn't whatever you are."

Right, I look different

Dante is a little annoyed because of this, so he reveals what he knows about him "Your ability is called "Aura" and I look like this because of my ability, which is called M.L.P.T."

As soon as he hears my explanation, Daniel drops his sword and collapses on the floor.

" *Huff*... as you can see, there is nothing left to do here, you should go and help magnus. They went straight north,"

Before I start galloping towards the street, my gaze is focused on Daniel, he can barely move. He is easy prey, we don't know what creatures exist besides the gorgon. I make my concern be known with a question

"Are you gonna be okey? if I leave you here?"

Unsure, Daniel answers me "To be honest, I don't know".

"mmh"

My metaphorical bulb turned on; I GOT AN IDEA!

"Do you want me to try to carry you? As far as I know, you may fit on my back, I should be able, maybe".

Daniel looked at me dumbfounded responding "Probably I wont fit you are kinda small, and I am quite tired right now."

"To be honest, both of us don't have much left, maybe we can scare him off, he fought Magnus, and I dont think magnus is an easy pick".

He seems to doubt Dante's logic but accepts, although he isn't entirely convinced but it's better than doing nothing

After he rides me, with some difficulty initially, ¿why? he hardly fits in my back, and the aches aren't gone at all, thus not putting me in the best condition for carrying something

I can see his disbelief in his eyes. I say something to reassure him, "Don't worry, You wont fall off, now let's find Magnus and the gorgon".

We begin to walk towards the north

...

After a minute of walking without saying anything, Daniel says something

"May I ask you a question?"

"Sure." I wonder what he's going to ask.

Daniel: "I'm quite curious, ¿What are you?"

"uh..." Dante is silent for a few seconds, thinking of what to say.

"To be honest, I don't know, the closest thing that come to my mind is some fantasy creature or something similar"

"Oh," he didn't expect that reply from me Apparently, Daniel asks another thing

"Do you have any idea of what you are? Maybe your tattoo has something to do with it".

Daniel is interested in knowing what this creature is because, in his world he doesn't recall something similar, simply it doesn't exist. He had never seen anything like this. The closest thing was the depictions of the Terran horse, but at most, there is some kinship between 30-50% of similarities

"Wait," my gait slows down a bit, my brain is beginning to connect the dots, "a tattoo? That sounds awfully familiar. Could you describe What does it look like"

Daniel: "It's a bit curious because it doesn't look painted on, but part of the fur, the shape is like blue gems 3, to be exact."

That description sounds truly familiar, I've heard it before. It's on the tip of my tongue, but I don't know what it is....

Wait a minute, A strange shape, horn, tattoo on the back... a vague idea comes to my mind, but I deny it with all my being, attempting to change the subject. I ask other things.

"Well, and uhh...you... why did you react in that way when you saw me?"

Daniel: "If an unknown creature approached you, how would you react then?"

"Oh," how stupid can I be

"well, if you phrase it like that," a small embarrassed laugh comes from me, I hadn't thought of it that way.

After that, our conversation dies, only silence accompanies us for the rest of the way

...

When we arrive at the site, we are in a mini-park with several buildings surrounding us. In the distance, we can see a body on the way there

After getting closer to the corpse, I point with my front paw at an enemy player. "Look, we won't even have to fight him; Magnus took care of it".

We could notice several wounds. The most noticeable one was on his chest, which had the machete buried in it.

We looked around for Magnus or the gorgon, and in no time, we found Magnus sitting on a bench with his back to us.

I shout at the top of my lungs, "MAGNUS!!!"

But he doesn't answer... maybe it's because he doesn't know my new voice... Daniel and I were suspicious at the beginning

Inside me, I already had an idea of the answer; vaguely, anguish invades me the more I think of it

"Magnus?"

I keep saying his name as I approach him.

As I look at him from the front, I realize that...

He is pale, no reaction from him, I don't see him breathing, his whole body is covered in bloody cuts.

Near his body is the scribble of an arrow of blood pointing towards a specific building.

"Thanks Magnus." After a few seconds of silence in front of Magnus, we continued without saying anything more

Following where the arrow points, a thin path of blood starts forming, it guides us to a basement

At the entrance, we get ready the gorgon he may be waiting for us

Daniel could already move on his own but his condition still wasn't the best, so I went in first

But the one thing I didn't expect was...

Seeing him pinned to the floor, by the look of his eyes, the flame would be extinguished at any time,

This is great

"Do you kill it or me?"

Daniel: "let me do it would be more easy with my sword"

As he moves closer to finish him,

The gorgon rises up and sends him flying into the wall

a loud -kegh is heard

The sound of the impact reverberates throughout the room with his body facing the floor

Let's hope he is ok

He locks his eyes in Daniel, and my body itself screamed

"hey, motherfucker HERE!" shit, that was reckless Didn't I learn my lesson before

"-grhh graaah"

In a teasing and robotic way, Dante says, "Nice argument. Unfortunately I did your mother"

"GRAAAH!"

I don't know if the bluff worked, but it swapped targets

The gorgon approaches Dante with some caution, From his experience most prey that stand firm have something hidden in them, poisons, something retractable that hides or pretends to be something more powerful he is almost sure that it's the latter.

"come on you son of a bitch!"

The gorgon tenses his body and jumps with everything, falling on top of Dante. Dante is at most 1.4 meters tall and the gorgon is almost 2 meters the size difference affects this outcome a lot

His entire body felt the impact, mainly his right front leg, which shielded him from the gorgon's mouth, just by the sheer impact, his arm almost broke

"AAAAGH!" IT'S FUCKING BROKEN!

Small tears come out of his eyes, the pain of having a bone broken and your arm constantly shredded it's a living hell

in a desperate attempt, Dante kicks and punches with everything he has but it's futile it doesn't even flinch

Until a scream of pain that doesn't come from Dante is heard

He can feel his grip weaken, slowly the gorgon begins to fall to the floor.

Behind the gorgon, I can hear something, the Gasps of Daniel while he pushes his sword even deeper inside the gorgon.

The only thing that comes out of my mouth is "T-Took L-Long" I can't even formulate the whole sentence

The blue screen greets me, and everything starts to blur, and that's the last thing I remember is black

FF: Dante wasn't going to be the main protagonist and instead he would have magnus ability.

-4rd (i feel like i am doing it wrong but i dont know what is wrong AAAAAAH i'll try to finish the next chapter this weekend Thanks for reading all my stuff i appreciate it)

-1st i think this chapter need a few tweaks it may change a bit just simple details so here you have it i'll do it later why? i'm Busy! and i wont have time until this Sunday (learning how to write you'll see the difference in the next chap)

2nd I'll change the first chapters a bit just extra details the more that i write the worse they feel (I'll do it later on like in chapter 10-20)

3rd READ AUTHORS NOTE IMPORTANT STUFF: not at all but it's about the fan-fic

(Look, , I do this as a hobby that's why slow updates, Another thing is that I had to do specific episodes again because Certain character is broken AF

Seriously i don't know what I thought when I gave him that character so early

Stuff about balance

this very hard to balance like MLP characters can beat to 60-95% of all the others universes characters, i'm not joking just to give you an idea of how strong they are "Discord" can beat Goku Yes it's sounds crazy BUT now you have an idea of how strong is the mlp universe and SORA (kingdom hearts) can beat the crap out of 90-99% of all the others characters It may depend on who is fighting and equipment but yes power scaling is a pain in the ass

From where do i get my source "My source is that I made it the Fuck Up" (a lot of wiki's LIKE REALLY A LOT i spend hours reading wiki's I took extra factors like weakness, objects, personality, etc), ugh what did i get myself into, good thing that he will NEVER unlock discord... ¿right? mini-spoiler he doesn't because of "funny stuff")

(If you still dont belive me that that discord can beat goku no problem just think that Kirby or Donald the duck (kingdom hearts) can destroy BOTH them)

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