Xeno_Xcalius
honestly the good thing about the story is the concept of a pain in mha, it could have been a good story if the chapters were more developed, they seem more like sketches of ideas written quickly, although you can always use this to make a rewrite in the future, It's just my personal recommendation, I give you 3.8 stars because I know how difficult it is to write, well good luck
the concept is nice like any other type of "reincarnated in (....) as (....) FF" but please where the fudge pain has all thoose kekkei genkai, where the fugde did he learn 8 gate, please be realistic open pain fandom to see his chakra nature and then you can start from there build your own jutsu. and the stories so far is pretty meh, just the skeleton of the narration no detail no explanation