Review Detail of CZFanficsDelta in In MHA as Pain

honestly the good thing about the story is the concept of a pain in mha, it could have been a good story if the chapters were more developed, they seem more like sketches of ideas written quickly, although you can always use this to make a rewrite in the future, It's just my personal recommendation, I give you 3.8 stars because I know how difficult it is to write, well good luck