Writing quality 2 stars its better then a translation but not by much. Update stability is 5 star it updates a lot. Story development is 3 stars its about a overpowered character with a harem its alright. Character design is 2 stars its alright most overpowered characters don't have a good character design. World background is 5 stars

Writing quality in the first two chapters were good but after it was trash the story development was good when you could understand what the author was trying to write I like the main character he has a cool backstory.

at first I was really looking forward to this but of course the author has to ruin it. writing quality two Star not unreadable but it's bad. updating stability is actually good four stars . story development is actually bad but I guess that's what a harem does to a story one star . character design the main character is dog s*** one star . wrote background it's solo leveling so it's pretty good but I'm also giving it a one star. Over all it's ass just from the first few chapters you can tell.

Nice chapter

Yah bye if this doesn't get dropped I will be back

Writing quality one star it's really bad not unreadable but really bad. update stability five stars I think we get a chapter every day. story development I think its a really good idea five star. character design he's okay he's not a b**** so five stars. World background five stars

The reason he's worried about Zeno or the God of destructions is that they can erase his soul if you get killed by an Angel or somebody else he would just die and go to the afterlife also the angels are really chill

Nice chapter

if you choose anything but the first one you're a fool

The author committed a sin the biggest sin that you can commit he use her instead of he author I can't believe you did this I'm ashamed that I liked it up to this point sinner

Bro I had to look this up but I thought Goku's power level when he was fighting Raditz was 800 to 900 but it was only 416

don't you love it when the main character forgets about ki

Main character is real stupid

It's so hard to find a good Dragon Ball Z fanfic and with a system too

love it

the reason that the writing quality is only 4 stars is because the quality of the writing gets rough sometimes. updating stability the book updates daily so 5 stars. story development is better then I thought it would be 5 stars. Character design is also better then I thought it would be 5 stars. world background is better then I thought it would be 5 star. When I first started reading this I thought it would be just terrible but it was really nice the mc isn't so bad.

Nice chapter

Great chapter author

First thing you did great on the grammar the words flow like a calm river. Second this hole idea is excellent. I'm looking forward to this.

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