Reviews of I.. Am God?

Just an author rating his own novel so that others can ask any questions regarding this work. I am an inexperienced author, so do expect mistakes and inconsistencies. I am also not a native English speaker as the language is just my second language, so expect wrong grammars along the way. I am trying to improve myself (and I think I'm improving a little) as the novel goes on, and I have also began watching writing tips, so wish me luck that I can improve! Anyways, if you have any questions, I'll try my best to answer all of them here. Washing Dishes goes Yaho!

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First of all, It has promise, but could really use some time to develop and nurture what the MC creates instead of moving to the next big thing. The existence of a system completely ruins the pacing by setting preterermined goals and typical narrative progression, and to be honest here– based on my personal oppinion; the Worldbuilding in this novel kind of sucks (Coming from a guy who sent hours and hours on worldbuilding videos and books, as well as higher quality western fantasy books). Second. Do try to be original sometimes. A "creation" type novel like Low Dimensional game or Shepparding Humanity are meant to express the Author's creativity/Imagination. And while they draw from other inspiration form other sources, they introduce it as unique elements into it's world that does not seem like just copy-paste from the originals. Like seriously, Elves? Orcs? Why don't you just copy all of Tolkien while at it. Cultivation? Chinese names despite the Chinese language and the linguistic evolution tract needed for it to exist? Lol, research? what's that? Anyways. While I know that this site isn't really a beacon of quality for these type of stories, creation type stories are my pet peeves, so I have pretty high standards for it. And to be blunt, this read like a 12 year old stole a bunch of elements from generic poorly written webnovels and mashed it all together to form this abomination. Actually develop your Main Character, too? Litteraly a cardboard cutout for the author to insert himself.

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10/10 The MC is really good and the development of the story is not boring as u know. The development of World is also very smooth its not too fast for me since this novel is about MC being god and its normal to the story to have long timeskip. although I'm still at early chapters I feel I will vote my Powerstone in this novel everyday XD

This is the best book Ive ever read, truly one of a kind!!! Are you still writing this book? I had binged it all in one day, and i honestly will be super sad if you end up dropping this😭. Hopefully you don’t, I really want to see more of Matthias’s story!!!

Too rushed and a lot of grammar mistakes can be found here.

Keep it up and learn more. The story is good, the world background is good, but the way you portray and narrate the story still needs improvement. Fix anything that needs to be fixed and keep updating steadily if you could.

Seriously READ it. it's so good, this novel is better than being reincarnated. pro tip=read it and you'll understand why life is important.

this is like reading something child with ADHD wrote. instead of focusing on one story at a time, author just jumps from one story to next without exploring and developing the previous one. it mixes so many genres that it is everything and nothing at the same time.

A very dumb naive mc and bunch of forced plots ,, .. ... .. ........ .. .. . .... .... .. .. .... .. .. .. . ... .. .. ... ... .

A really good story ruined by the MC, he’s either autistic or has 40 IQ. With every decision he takes, I wonder if the author just wants to troll us or something.

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I liked it at the start, but he went from acting like the 100000 year old god he his to being a teenager again. It just seems unlikely that someone who’s lived that long would even have close to the same personality they had when a teen.

Can you stop suddenly jumping from plot to different plot I often confuse trying to make sense on the events. for example, we didn't even get a decent amount of chapters of him going to school and when someone tried to sent assassins to kill him(what happened to the assailant). Also he was just fighting for the empire he is leading then suddenly he is sent a world to save a world from a tyrant as a training. We didn't even get much conclusion to those stories as far as I can remember. It's like you're just changing story the based on how you want it to be and anytime you want. I don't see your writing style improving throughout the story, just a ton of forced and out of place plots so I don't see your claim that you are improving. I hope you can fix this.

Well... I really didn't find it appealing at all... To me it seems like it's just a teenage boy playing "World Craft" which is a God simulator Mobile Game.

There is no god only a punky human ..................................................................................................................................

В начале было интересно, но потом становилось всё скучнее и скучнее. Сюжет продвигается семимильными шагами, даже не давая осознать его, про миры/сюжеты второстепенных героев можно и не говорить - ИХ НЕТУ. Герой который вернулся из "Таинственной бездны" спустя 10ххххх лет, чувствуется ребенком, а он прошу заметить, познал всё... Это сугубо мое мнение, я не призываю не читать данное произведение. Просто говорю что мне не понравилось (почти всё, хы). Попробуйте почитать, а после уже сами поймёте, нравиться ли вам или нет. Автору удачи, чтобы след.произведения были нормальными.

I doubt this involves much kingdom building as soon as cultivation is involved . disappointed. it's too similar too low dimensional game . .

The concept is amazing and interesting however I want more explanation for example more information about the Alpha something (I forgot the name) because I want to know besides being the enemy of Omega something what are their other purpose. Anyway I want more descriptions about the things MC created if possible. Keep up the good work😊😊

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