First of all, It has promise, but could really use some time to develop and nurture what the MC creates instead of moving to the next big thing. The existence of a system completely ruins the pacing by setting preterermined goals and typical narrative progression, and to be honest here– based on my personal oppinion; the Worldbuilding in this novel kind of sucks (Coming from a guy who sent hours and hours on worldbuilding videos and books, as well as higher quality western fantasy books). Second. Do try to be original sometimes. A "creation" type novel like Low Dimensional game or Shepparding Humanity are meant to express the Author's creativity/Imagination. And while they draw from other inspiration form other sources, they introduce it as unique elements into it's world that does not seem like just copy-paste from the originals. Like seriously, Elves? Orcs? Why don't you just copy all of Tolkien while at it. Cultivation? Chinese names despite the Chinese language and the linguistic evolution tract needed for it to exist? Lol, research? what's that? Anyways. While I know that this site isn't really a beacon of quality for these type of stories, creation type stories are my pet peeves, so I have pretty high standards for it. And to be blunt, this read like a 12 year old stole a bunch of elements from generic poorly written webnovels and mashed it all together to form this abomination. Actually develop your Main Character, too? Litteraly a cardboard cutout for the author to insert himself.
WashingDishes_07
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LIKEThank you for the review! I am still progressing to create my own world, slowly building myself up, climbing my way to a decent author. I also deemed the system useless after some chapters so it's gone. As time goes by and I continue to write, I am forming my own version of what I really want to write. Being a novel about creation, it really isn't easy to create it. I need to begin with basing with other novels and get inspiration from it and slowly develop my own style. Your review and the comments that I got have given me the determination to continue and develop it together with my own. Thank you! 😁