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Tadashi_Yoshida
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A bit promotional work, for it is I, the author! I've had this little story inside my head for a long time. I always thought "What if someone was kidnapped and transported to another world?" So now, I decided to bring those thoughts into life! Or rather, into words on a book. This is my first book so it may not be the best to you guys, but it is to me. I think this book is one of the best things I've ever done and to prove it, I'm giving it my all in this novel.
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The story is interesting. I love cats! đ The chapters are ultra-long. Long like: if out of each chapter you make five, you won't feel that they are short. Advice to the author: keep chapters under 2k words each. Depending on the frequency of releasing chapters, you will be featured on the front page. E.g. daily updates will get you into the 'daily updated' for desktop version. If you upload 2ch/day for 2 weeks, you will end up in trending section. It's a great way to attract more readers. Keep up the good work! đ
What's the biggest dream of a cat? Go to a village where people have cat ears and tails! Nekomatas come to me! Who cares if it's gonna be a harem as long as the cats are mine! Hehehehe! The author is very creative for the name of the novel's species and the places also sound very good, the world is already forming in chapter 2. This without being too tiring for readers. And the first chapter is very interesting and mysterious! Ahh, I can't talk if it's not spoiler! I recommend the reader a fan of cats and harems!
This story is intriguing--and effectively reels you in--right at the get-go. The main character wakes up in a strange land, with strange people, and it's that deep sense of dissonance that propels the reader to continue reading the chapters. It's creatively crafted, too, and deserves its own cult following. Enjoyed every moment of it! Will be back for more.
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