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A bit promotional work, for it is I, the author! I've had this little story inside my head for a long time. I always thought "What if someone was kidnapped and transported to another world?" So now, I decided to bring those thoughts into life! Or rather, into words on a book. This is my first book so it may not be the best to you guys, but it is to me. I think this book is one of the best things I've ever done and to prove it, I'm giving it my all in this novel.
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How big of a role does harem, h scenes and romance have in your book? Is it slow romance? Hate when it's too slow.
Tadashi_Yoshida:Yes, it's a harem
The Steven/Kanna romance is a slow burn. The Madelyn/Lilith ship is even slower. The romance/erotica isn't the main focal point of the series and of all the chapters, only ~4 of them have H-scenes. The harem is large but I haven't done it any justice. To put the barrier down, I've been trying to write a reverse-gangbang for the longest time but I can't seem to fit it in properly.
Malcolm_Massey:How big of a role does harem, h scenes and romance have in your book? Is it slow romance? Hate when it's too slow.
Tadashi_Yoshida:The Steven/Kanna romance is a slow burn. The Madelyn/Lilith ship is even slower. The romance/erotica isn't the main focal point of the series and of all the chapters, only ~4 of them have H-scenes. The harem is large but I haven't done it any justice. To put the barrier down, I've been trying to write a reverse-gangbang for the longest time but I can't seem to fit it in properly.
Tadashi_Yoshida:The Steven/Kanna romance is a slow burn. The Madelyn/Lilith ship is even slower. The romance/erotica isn't the main focal point of the series and of all the chapters, only ~4 of them have H-scenes. The harem is large but I haven't done it any justice. To put the barrier down, I've been trying to write a reverse-gangbang for the longest time but I can't seem to fit it in properly.
Yeah, there definitely is but it's uncommon. I've planned a tonal shift from the 'action' to 'everyday life' and it might make romance more prominent. As for the reverse gangbang: I've read a few erotic novels on here and I've yet to see something more than a threesome. There isn't any reason other than "I just wanted to do it." It's probably for the best that I don't publish such a chapter (lol)
Malcolm_Massey:Is there at least stuff in the other chapters like kissing, hugging, cuddling and other stuff?
Ok so it's all of his harem members just having sex? If the MC is getting raped then it's just weird. I see no reason to add a chapter with the reverse gangbang. But I would limit the yuri scenes in the in reverse gangbang though.
Tadashi_Yoshida:Yeah, there definitely is but it's uncommon. I've planned a tonal shift from the 'action' to 'everyday life' and it might make romance more prominent. As for the reverse gangbang: I've read a few erotic novels on here and I've yet to see something more than a threesome. There isn't any reason other than "I just wanted to do it." It's probably for the best that I don't publish such a chapter (lol)
Oh and I think adding stuff like kissing, hugging, cuddling and stuff like that is good to have every now and then to show that the harem isn't just for sex and showing they are not just female companions.
Tadashi_Yoshida:Yeah, there definitely is but it's uncommon. I've planned a tonal shift from the 'action' to 'everyday life' and it might make romance more prominent. As for the reverse gangbang: I've read a few erotic novels on here and I've yet to see something more than a threesome. There isn't any reason other than "I just wanted to do it." It's probably for the best that I don't publish such a chapter (lol)