Wen Xiao
If you're going to have the MC adopt another child, what was the point if said child is constantly being left out?! So many times MC mentions how she's a mother of 3 (you mean 4, remember the other child?!). Said child disappears and reappears constantly, with 30-40 chapters passing with no mention of where he is or anything. So far she's left him behind in a market, during a raid of rioters, and the in the mountains! Like, I don't understand! The idea of the original storylines protagonist becoming the adopted brother of the three villains isn't bad, I like it! But the the author just continuously ignores or deletes his presence from existence in the story! What was the point? Personally, if I was that child, I'd go straight to the police and report my adopted mother for abandoned and neglect! Is the author trying to say adopted children matter less than blood-related ones?!
So ive read up to chapter 130 something and i just had to stop and heres why (contains spoilers) . . . . . . . . .The 3 children were cute at first untill they started throwing temper tantrums at each turn but i was like, Okay it can be endearing but then when the identical brother of the ml started to appear, which lead to several misunderstandings, i couldnt take it anymore! What was even worse was that the ml decided to not come clean to the fl after saving her daughter and thought it was best to leave the fl in the hands of a brother he knows is dangerous??? As a lover of fluff my heart could not take the frustrations i felt several times reading this novelš„“ In conclusion, all i will say is that if youre ready to be frustrated a lot and love novels with ridiculous misunderstandings, this novel is what youve been looking for
Pretty horrible because it just revolves around the kids being mad and acting far too mature for a 6 year old. The MC is just a regular basically OP mom with 3 hateful kids a good nice one. Still canāt process how one of them knowa chemistry to the point where he can develop a drug and the girl can hack. Where, how, who taught them?
This story needs a TRAGEDY TAG. Like ASAP. It held so much promise throughout and also a bit of fun. But yeah, I feel lied to. I donāt read so I can feel like this by the end of a book. I wish I had warning (i.e a TRAGEDY TAG). I have no idea about the āUpdating Stabilityā of this novel as I found it already āCompletedā but I put āļøāļøāļøāļø anyway since it was all done.
dropped. the story just revolves around a super OP mother from post apocalyptic world. her skills just popped out from nowhere. the 3 kids acts matured than a 6 y.o kid. i can understand if the author choose to make their ages 9 or 10 but nah. 6 y.o kids dont have that much control or decision of their own. its too over fantasize and unrealistic.i wasted 1 day reading and thought it would improve but nah this just gets worse. ššš
I tried. I think I gave this story a good shot, since I read all the way up to ch 305. The quality of the writing has stayed the same. Itās way too fast-paced and the world is not built at all. I barely register the world. Each conflict takes like 5 ch to resolve and each chapter is very short. The story should be fleshed out more. There is no suspense in anything, and I could not care about the characters anymore. The characters are very flat, and the children only appear in the beginning. They pop up now and again but act way too weird, even for geniuses. The ML is trusts the MC way too much and too easily for someone given his position and how he was claimed to act ij the past. The relationship between multiple characters are messy and the villains donāt have any other motive for what they do other than āI hate the MCā which by now, doesnāt feel like itās enough. Since I donāt know what the raw is like, I can only assume the translation is good as it can be, and the original story is messy itself.
I skimmed the whole novel when I realized that I would be at risk of losing brain cells otherwise. The only reason I finished the novel is because I bulk unlocked all the chapters in the beginning since there was a 10% discount and it would be a waste to not read what I already paid for. To sum up, if you expect common sense or realism in any way, skip this novel. Even while skimming I was able to catch how messed up, stupid and illogical the characters and plot are. Not to mention that the antagonists are like cockroaches, coming back all the time despite being braindead and getting caught, only to reappear again. Rinse and repeat. The so-called genius children also keep getting kidnapped because they can't seem to learn to not follow strangers or to not run off alone without supervision. And can anyone tell me why the president of a country keeps running to the frontline? Doesn't he have any official work to do? Is he itching to get himself killed? No wonder his country is so chaotic. (ćą² ēą² )ć Anyone with proper three views and common sense will get a headache reading this.
OH MY GOD! That FL seriously! š She's everything! And the kids are just as amazing. There aren't enough chapters to really have an opinion about the story development but from what I've read so far - chapter 20 - we should only expect good things. Let's pray it's picked up because it's been a long time since there was such a good novel in trial read