Reviews of I Help A NPC Become The Legendary Witch

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The summary made this story to look simple and makes you assume there might be Plot for this "Witch" maybe MC changed her fate. But then again I've read too many shoujos with Witch plots so I may be overestimating things. A male MC makes me want to read this!! Just no Harem please. Lol

25 chapter review. Honestly, much better than I expected. The mc transmigrated or reincarnated as a summoned beast and a random little girl named Vivian is his summoner. I like to say that he transmigrated in a virtual game similar to The Legendary Mechanic. The mc himself is a BOSS-rated monster so he is quite strong with high potential. The mc doesn't have a status panel but his summoner aka random NPC villager girl, Vivian does. As a NPC she can't see her status panel but MC can and he also can operate it. So, basically he can control the development of his summoner and himself through Vivian's panel. Translation Quality: 5* (It isn't MTL but you might see some weird words that looks like mistranslation but probably isn't. The translator didn't give context so it's lost translation instead. Meaning lost in translation) SoU: 5* (It's trial read) Story Development: 5* (Honestly, read it yourself, it has 25 chapters as I am writing this review) Character Design: 4* (Only Vivian has some unique personality, the rest of the characters are quite basic designs) World Background: 5* (Basically The Legendary Mechanic. But for those who don't know. It's basically a 100% realistic virtual world where the mc is transmigrated as a summoned beast of a NPC, due that he is a NPC he doesn't have a level limit and can become very strong. Because it's a game there will be major events leading to many changes in the world where the mc will take advantage of due his future knowledge of the game) Overall score: 4.8 Personal score: 4.5

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Ot was entertaining until chapter 40 that become Mtl. Just another scam

For a Webnovel translation the quality of this story so far has shocked me with real story, world building, background, and character design that go past any other translation I’ve read so far

The plot is hurried, the mc just need 3 lines to accepted his transmigration and the change of species, for the others reviews I my expectation was apointed for the next TLM insted of this mediocrity,

Very interesting so far as long as it maintains the quality which I think it will do and even be better in the future since it sets up a lot of stuff that will pay off

Initial impression is that it reminds me of The Legendary Mechanic, only the reincarnated player is the summoned beast of an NPC instead of the NPC themselves. Hopefully this change means that there will be, comparatively, more character interaction and supported character growth instead of the MC being a lone wolf that everyone close to him is trying to catch up with and everyone on his level is trying to make use of him. I'm looking forward to seeing if it can live up to my expectations

I want to like this novel because it has similar premise to legendary mechanic. But wow the writing is just terrible. Pacing is horrible, first plot point hasn't been completed at chapter 40 yet a bunch of other nonsense has happened, and the girl has gone from weak villager to Reaping the lives of elites from the city. Story is just so disjointed its not fun to read

another mtl scam, dont bother. so sad what has become of this app

A great start can’t wait to see where its going. Somethings in the beginning like the Mc adaptability were a little questionable but you had the fl’s reactions to make up for it. I’d give the beginning a 4.5 out of 5

I only read it till chapter 40 because it became boring................................................................. I read this is qidian...

There is this slight resemblance to legendary mechanic, but it doesn't seem bad basing from the first chapters that i have read.

The Characters are displayed Fullly... interesting character in fact.. great storyline but the world plot is not displayed Fullly .... I don't know about future but starting is great ... worthy read..

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If you like The Legendary Mechanic, you probably will enjoy this one. Pity though after chapter 40, it's mtl. Just like TLM, imo this kind of novel is boring when the story is focusing too much with the npc protagonist solo adventure, when actually the best part about this kind of novel is the players.