Reviews of I Have A Monster Rearing System
I Have A Monster Rearing System
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What is it with badly written novels about per raising systems. The system in this novel is totally unbalanced and any future conflict is the result of the MC stupidity. With the system the MC could gain a new skill with one pet in less than half a day. Meaning he could chose a number of low level insects and gain an exponential number of skills. 1 pet = 1 skill/day + points to gain more pets 1 skill = 300 points 1 wasp pet = 5 points 1 wasp pet = 60 new insect pets/day Even if the MC would do the most ineffective thing and only allow for new pets after getting the skill from all the old ones he would have more than 60 skills after 3 days, more than 3600 after 5 days and 216000 skills after 7 days. Meaning that after one month the MC could create a wave of upgraded insects stronger than any locust plague and he would only grow stronger with each fight. If the MC has the patience of the avarage 12 year old collecting trading cards, he can rule the entire world in a few months. Where is the challenge in that. Creating an OP system which only does not destroy the entire story because the MC is dump as **** in not the way to write a good story.
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The story is decent by web novel standards, and the book seem like it's going to have a more serious tone then the usual brain dead slapstick comedy. However there are some concerns that ruins the book. The system is OP, if used right the mc could've controlled the world in a month. the problem is he doesn't, I don't mind OP cheats if the mc knows how to utilize it. He is kinda dumb, but it seems like author wants him to be smart. One example is where he chooses to hunt big game over insects. Instead of capturing multiple insects and have them go hunt out in swarms for points he chooses to hunt big game himself because it's apparently more worth it. The maths states a single wasp he captured cost 5 points and over the course of 4 hours gave him more then 500 points. This is compared to hunting bigger animals which gives 100 points a pop, and usually takes hours to catch. With this it can be seen that which one is more worth it and takes less effort. in a system where there is no quantity limit the better choice is definitely to go wide with cheaper critters and exponentially grow stronger and then build your actual beasts. The numbers in the novel is also a little fudged apparently by hunting in a day with a party he was able to earn 60k points which meant he had to have killed 300-600 lighting leopards or other demonic beasts in a day that's more then 20 an hour highly improbable. Honestly I would recommend it it's not terrible through its faults.
It's an okay story. However, there is no tension. Rather than struggling and earning rewards, the protagonist only grinds, which isn't very interesting to read; even the narrative agrees, and skips over it and just says he earns 600 points overnight. In addition, the system is very OP. The animal the protagonist tames obtain special/magic-esque abilities almost immediately. It is disappointing because the protagonist does not use the system very effectively. As mentioned before, earning points is very easy if a bit tedious and the protagonist grinds to get enough points to easily level up his pets. While I can understand wanting to carefully choose which one he wants, the system makes it so that there's no need to be careful. He can easily obtain points, and (so far) he has no limit to how many pets he can have. Likewise, he doesn't have to take the time to tame them as they are immediately 100% docile to him. Lastly, there is no time limit. He doesn't have an urgent reason to rush to gain power. Of course, the world is very dangerous, but his village seems relatively safe. If there is danger just being in the village as a citizen, there is no mention of it, so it seems safe to assume he isn't in immediate danger. He could've just tamed as many insects and small animals as he could and gradually form an army of lethal animals.
Espero que haja mais, Γ© uma boa proposta. Uma coisa que fiquei na dΓΊvida : Os insetos eram pequenos, do tamanho normal??! Os pontos sΓ£o bem altos com uma equipe.... Tomara que ele continue com eles por um tempo, mas como ele irΓ‘ explicar para as pessoas que as Bestas sΓ£o dele?! Ahahahahahahahaha IrΓ£o querer matar!
