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Damp_Towel
Damp_TowelLv103yrDamp_Towel

The story is decent by web novel standards, and the book seem like it's going to have a more serious tone then the usual brain dead slapstick comedy. However there are some concerns that ruins the book. The system is OP, if used right the mc could've controlled the world in a month. the problem is he doesn't, I don't mind OP cheats if the mc knows how to utilize it. He is kinda dumb, but it seems like author wants him to be smart. One example is where he chooses to hunt big game over insects. Instead of capturing multiple insects and have them go hunt out in swarms for points he chooses to hunt big game himself because it's apparently more worth it. The maths states a single wasp he captured cost 5 points and over the course of 4 hours gave him more then 500 points. This is compared to hunting bigger animals which gives 100 points a pop, and usually takes hours to catch. With this it can be seen that which one is more worth it and takes less effort. in a system where there is no quantity limit the better choice is definitely to go wide with cheaper critters and exponentially grow stronger and then build your actual beasts. The numbers in the novel is also a little fudged apparently by hunting in a day with a party he was able to earn 60k points which meant he had to have killed 300-600 lighting leopards or other demonic beasts in a day that's more then 20 an hour highly improbable. Honestly I would recommend it it's not terrible through its faults.

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Damp_TowelLv10Damp_Towel

after reading the next 5 chapters, not looking to good! Story takes a turn for the worst with the characters becoming very dumb and one note. Could've been a decent novel, but cliche and forced plot development as well as characters ruined it. Will continue it though to see how it goes