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What is it with badly written novels about per raising systems. The system in this novel is totally unbalanced and any future conflict is the result of the MC stupidity. With the system the MC could gain a new skill with one pet in less than half a day. Meaning he could chose a number of low level insects and gain an exponential number of skills. 1 pet = 1 skill/day + points to gain more pets 1 skill = 300 points 1 wasp pet = 5 points 1 wasp pet = 60 new insect pets/day Even if the MC would do the most ineffective thing and only allow for new pets after getting the skill from all the old ones he would have more than 60 skills after 3 days, more than 3600 after 5 days and 216000 skills after 7 days. Meaning that after one month the MC could create a wave of upgraded insects stronger than any locust plague and he would only grow stronger with each fight. If the MC has the patience of the avarage 12 year old collecting trading cards, he can rule the entire world in a few months. Where is the challenge in that. Creating an OP system which only does not destroy the entire story because the MC is dump as **** in not the way to write a good story.
I Have A Monster Rearing System
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you are dumb you know. the novel has just got ten chapters and its already bad for you and also mc being dumb is good as he can get better throughout the series take luffy for example starts out dumb but he matures through out the series which is more enjoyable. if you dont like it go back and read solo leveling or the 5th time
Luffy is a child without any education and a delusion of grandeur. Nothing wrong with that. His simple, honest and very impulsive personality drives a storyline in a world with no real consequences and a general disregard for human life. Here the personality fits the situation. The MC has education and experience with life and it can be assumed that anyone with a basic education has learned at least a tiny bit of patience after living in a world with real and sometimes devastating consequences. The MCs behavior is stupid reckless and simply not suitable for his established background. Character growth is not start stupid and become smart. Character growth is the development or growth of character traits as a consequence of actions and/or experiences inside the story. There is a difference. I would ask you to actually read the novel and the review before commentingđ
lemonlemon:you are dumb you know. the novel has just got ten chapters and its already bad for you and also mc being dumb is good as he can get better throughout the series take luffy for example starts out dumb but he matures through out the series which is more enjoyable. if you dont like it go back and read solo leveling or the 5th time
LightningCatThief:Luffy is a child without any education and a delusion of grandeur. Nothing wrong with that. His simple, honest and very impulsive personality drives a storyline in a world with no real consequences and a general disregard for human life. Here the personality fits the situation. The MC has education and experience with life and it can be assumed that anyone with a basic education has learned at least a tiny bit of patience after living in a world with real and sometimes devastating consequences. The MCs behavior is stupid reckless and simply not suitable for his established background. Character growth is not start stupid and become smart. Character growth is the development or growth of character traits as a consequence of actions and/or experiences inside the story. There is a difference. I would ask you to actually read the novel and the review before commentingđ
lemonlemon:you are dumb you know. the novel has just got ten chapters and its already bad for you and also mc being dumb is good as he can get better throughout the series take luffy for example starts out dumb but he matures through out the series which is more enjoyable. if you dont like it go back and read solo leveling or the 5th time
lemonlemon:you are dumb you know. the novel has just got ten chapters and its already bad for you and also mc being dumb is good as he can get better throughout the series take luffy for example starts out dumb but he matures through out the series which is more enjoyable. if you dont like it go back and read solo leveling or the 5th time
where did u get the idea that he will become 0.01 stronger then he is rn im going to bet he is gonna become even more dumb
lemonlemon:you are dumb you know. the novel has just got ten chapters and its already bad for you and also mc being dumb is good as he can get better throughout the series take luffy for example starts out dumb but he matures through out the series which is more enjoyable. if you dont like it go back and read solo leveling or the 5th time