Apocalypse_GOD
Hey author! I don't know who you are. I don't know what you want. If you're looking for stones or gems, I can tell you I don't have extra I am a cheap person... but what I do have are a very particular set of skills. Skills I have acquired over a very long career. Skills that make me a nightmare for people like you. If you drop this novel go now, that will not be the end of it - I will not only look for you, I will not only pursue you... but if you do drop this, I will look for you, I will find you... and I will kill you...kimosabe...
A lot of potential, but with poor execution. There are too many times that the story contradicts itself. Moreover the MC is too OP and everybody follows him without ever questioning him from the first moment they meet him. Finally this story should really need some editing, there are so many errors that are even indicated by the readers, but the author didn’t bother to correct them....
The story has a lot of potential and generates great momentum and urgency in the early chapters causing you to really get into it. The problem is the author interrupts that for what is essentially a side quest. Breaking all sense of urgency and emersion from it. Its like someone is running in the Olympics is about to get gold and then hits the breaks to check his phone real quick, only for everyone to gain on him and surpass him. To me breaking that momentum cost the story a large part of its appeal, resulting in a less extravagant rating. The worst thing is that I get the how and why the author did it. Even if it would not have gotten past an editor and instead would have been moved to the day after the mass grinding race before betas end... Certainly the info dump on items that would later exist in the real life game but did not exist yet and the shorter chapters really didn't help things. Thus my recommendation is this: Read the story if you're alright with such mistakes every now and then and simply enjoy a good concept more than the pacing and timing of stories over all. For a novel on webnovel, this has a great concept and nice story, if it sees a worthy editor as a completed story, I have no doubt it would sell as a stand alone ebook.
Mc is one hell of a crazy guy. He’s not hesitated at all when he committed suicide (meaning, it may trigger some readers, so please consider this aspect of novel before reading - just because Mc can disregard his own life does not means the other should follow his example). The author really creative when he utilize Mc’s power, cause Mc to be able to do something similar to teleport. This guy is also crazy enough to kill himself so many times to gain point or grid skills. (Well, consider his past life, it is to be expected for Mc to be a bit of a bonker). Any future plans to created a bunker in the apocalypse are quite promising, but sadly because of the disappearance of the author, we are unable to see it come to fruition.
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I’m like 80% I already reviewed this book but the review disappeared so imma be lazy and instead of the several paragraph review that is supposed be here I’ll give a summary instead of my old review Amazing job on your MCs ability most authors even with said ability would rarely kill MC but in your book he dies several times in some chapters so good job on that I know that was a lazy bad and uninspiring review but whatever too lazy to type anything longer sorry 😐 not my fault my old one disappeared I’ve read up to chapter 74-76 or something and new chapters are out but I’m letting them build up because i can read the like 14 new chapters in one sitting easy