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Review Detail of DrewWells in I Can Respawn In The Apocalypse!

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DrewWells
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A lot of potential, but with poor execution. There are too many times that the story contradicts itself. Moreover the MC is too OP and everybody follows him without ever questioning him from the first moment they meet him. Finally this story should really need some editing, there are so many errors that are even indicated by the readers, but the author didn’t bother to correct them....

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I Can Respawn In The Apocalypse!

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SUBSCRIBE_MY_LIST
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I agree aside from the OP part, he only has a respawn cheat which allows him to do I sane things. Later on the author tries to limit this by making him take along his sister in ever increasingly poor decisions that are just frustrating to the reader and make the character look like he has a mental deficiency. The concept of this story is great but it is curbed by that poor execution. The worst thing is that if someone were to copy the story, edit it to fix the issues pointed out and upload it as a fanfic of this, that it would be better than the original just by removing certain things and making slightly smarter decisions.... That would immediately kill the author's following as the author has not shown an indication of wanting to grow or taking feedback seriously. So far, the biggest issues are pacing, continuety and the character's decision making. If the story is building up to something, you can rest assured to know that whatever is slowly pushing you to the edge of your seat will be interrupted way before you get there, ensuring you will be bored or sufficiently irritated before it happens to no longer care at all...

David_Drake
David_DrakeLv4David_Drake

Lol you're right. I also know a lot of authors that spin the criticism and make it look like the reviewers are at fault.

SUBSCRIBE_MY_LIST:I agree aside from the OP part, he only has a respawn cheat which allows him to do I sane things. Later on the author tries to limit this by making him take along his sister in ever increasingly poor decisions that are just frustrating to the reader and make the character look like he has a mental deficiency. The concept of this story is great but it is curbed by that poor execution. The worst thing is that if someone were to copy the story, edit it to fix the issues pointed out and upload it as a fanfic of this, that it would be better than the original just by removing certain things and making slightly smarter decisions.... That would immediately kill the author's following as the author has not shown an indication of wanting to grow or taking feedback seriously. So far, the biggest issues are pacing, continuety and the character's decision making. If the story is building up to something, you can rest assured to know that whatever is slowly pushing you to the edge of your seat will be interrupted way before you get there, ensuring you will be bored or sufficiently irritated before it happens to no longer care at all...
Eleanor_La_Pure
Eleanor_La_PureLv1Eleanor_La_Pure

If you like second chance/time travel novels, or heroic DarkFantasy stories, give it a try: APOCALYPSE WAR: Survive. Die & Restart This is probably the future best novel on Webnovel.