Reviews of I Become Strong Because Of A Mistake
I Become Strong Because Of A Mistake
rey12
- Overall Rate
- Writing Quality
- Updating Stability
- Story Development
- Character Design
- world background
This story is ****, I can not emphasize this enough ****. In the first few chapters the story is somewhat good and with potential, it could have been a comedy of an overpowered mc or a slice of life type of story or a story with some depth to the characters. Instead this story reads as if a middle schooler has written it and thinks himself the protagonist and gives the protagonist all the power making the story One Dimensional dull and boring. He gets the power> becomes strongest (without doing anything) > makes whatever he wants >becomes a billionaire> revives his family (just because he wants to) > does any thing he wants. To me this is nothing but lazy writing. I write this review not to trash the story or the author but to make him better at this. Only positive point of this story is the update regularity
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STORY READ BECAUSE OF A MISTAKE even getting highest status in everything mc think like brain damaged people..no creative thinking.. world background creating is totally bull****..there is actually nothing.. feel like a chuniby dream..authersan I know you hard worked for this novel .. but I cannot read this anymore
Great novel but currently it is more a slice of life with OP MC type and no real fight beside fighting the dragons and goblins heck its not even a fight it's a one sided massacre lol. but anyways it is a great novel. just please dont be like other original novel author who would drop their story .. and please update more and make it longer chapter.
Greetings Author! I had initially not thought about writing a review, but then I saw that no one has done a review yet, which made me wan't to do the first one. Writing Quality - Although there may be some grammatical mistakes from time to time, as well as spelling mistakes. I still like the way that the novel is written. I believe that you could produce a chapter a day instead of 2 and then focus on making the chapter a bit longer, otherwise, I truly am loving it so far. Stability of Updates - When I check the release date of the different chapters than you have produced so far, I can give it a solid 5 stars. Although, I am bound to change this if you suddenly slow down the pace. But at the moment, great job! Keep it up. Story Development - I cannot say much about this yet, but I have liked the story so far and how it has been progressing. For now, I will leave this at 4 stars and once you reach 50 chapters, I will update this once again. Character Design - We have not really seen a lot of characters thus far, but I am sure that this is bound to change as well. And like with the Story Development, I will change this too after 50 chapters. If you have failed to come up with some characters, like allies or something of the sort, then I will have to downgrade the rating here. World Background - I cannot say that I am 100% sure what this means. But assuming that it is how the world is built. I love it, absolutely love it. I cannot remember the last time I've seen a novel with an overpowered character that can switch between the real world and fictional world. I guess that novels with a cheat MC in the real world is just one of my weird "novel fetishes". All in all, fantastic. I really do love it so far and I intend to give all of my power stones solely to this novel till you have gotten enough reviews to get a rating next to the novel "cover". I do have a tip if you wish for your novel to get bigger. Firstly, add tags! Secondly, add an original cover! and third, but not least: Keep the update rate at at least 1 chapter a day. -Tristan (If you find any grammatical errors or spelling mistakes, then I apologize)
Needs more details in it to define the lack of water flowing through the river makes the eyes portray a stream. Going with the basic sappy type for frame work needs more of a controversial higharchy to nail it to the wall so people passing will stop dead in there tracks and be messmurised "look at that!.... WOW"
I don't have much to say after what TristanGJ said i can only say that it's a very good novel to people that loves an OP MC that develops quickly . I would like to see more chapters because i'm a really fast reader and i can't get enough i wish you could produce more chapters that are longer . And to finish this review I would like to thank u dear Author .
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Kudos to the author for writing his original work. It had an OP idea and most of these are usually criticized. I am not here to say something good either. The OP plot is usually annoying and lacks more logic than any marvel or dc comic. This book is that and perhaps some side elements to spice it up. It also continued at a point where it could have stopped and had a saving grace. I really couldn't say anything positive, but the author still put himself out there
