Review Detail of Daoist_Urimiku in I Become Strong Because Of A Mistake

Since I don't know the age of the author nor how much experience he or she has, I won't be able to criticize the author for writing this kind of story. Giving the benefit of a doubt, the author obviously isn't a professional like many others. But haters will always be around for everyone. That is a given. Despite agreeing with histogrimoitaku about the inconsistency of the world or character design, there is a great amount of potential for this story. The main character has the mind of a young teenager of around 15 years old. Wanting to become rich and showing off his power, these are characteristics that are often seen in immature people. Despite his age being 20, since immortals are not affected by age, we can say that the age of the protagonist doesn't matter anymore. I'm a chef irl. I know the reason behing expensive meals. A $250 steak means one or more of the following points: - expensive location - a very large staff - expensive ingredients. If the restaurant priced their steak to break even, the ingredients alone would cost $83. Or for profit, at lesst $50 would be the ingredient cost. Then you have the wine. Wine is usually 5x the original price. Arc drinks a $100 wine for $500, and then proceeds to buy the same wine from the restaurant to take home. If I was the restaurant owner, Arc is now the VVIP. Just from this example, Arc can be seen as lacking knowledge and is also not good with using money. This proves that he's acting like a typical teenager who suddenly became rich. Often the author's personality or character is portrayed in the main character and/or supporting characters. So assuming that this is true, if the author is also younger than we think, I believe that we have no right as older adults of society to harshly criticize the author for this story. Instead we should give tips, suggestions, and encouragements to the author. It's a great story with unlimited potential, the story is lacking in detail but that cab always change and be improved as the story continues. I gave a 5/5 for Stability of Updates and for Story Development. The story will get better. The author hasn't dropped this project yet which means the story has room for growth. My only advice is for the author to take advice but don't let your readers' suggestions influence your story. Like when readers comment, "give MC this skill or that ability," take into heavy consideration and let readers know if it will be implemented or not in the future. Well, readers, I hope my review helps you decide whether to read or not, but I assure you, this story is like a diamond in a trash can. The idea is pretty common but executed well. Once the author is able to take the diamond out if the trash, we can easily see this story becoming a masterpiece in the future.