From what I've read so far.... Story is missing so much detail that it doesn't make sense. The main character is very stupid. Overpowered but super stupid. He doesn't seem to have gained any intelligence despite having 100 trillion points in intrlligence. The stats are just for show. The average level 1 player has 10 in each stat and 0 in luck. 1 black gold coin is $1. 1 goblin drops 1 black gold coin. It takes several minutes (at least 120 seconds) to kill several thousand goblins. Not only that, rank 2 or 3 weapons are dropped by boss mobs. Rank 2 weapon can sell for 100k coins. 100k goblins equals rank 2 weapon. Rather than not making any sense, the story is full of inconsistencies that make it difficult for civilized or educated readers to continue on. For example: MC has ability to create any skill he wants. Infinitely. He could create a skill to give him infinite stats. He could create a skill to defy all laws of physics. He could create a skill to infinitely make money. He could create a skill to disable the immortality of other people. There are infinitely many ways to make the MC more OP, but the MC has no brain to make these happen. Which is good. For the plot, if the MC was smart, the story would end on chapter one. Writing Quality: 3/5 Updates: 4/5 Story Development: 1/5 Character Design: 5/5 World Background: 1/5
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