Reviews of I Became a bombshell in MHA

I forst wrote a DC fanfic which i did not know enouph about and i l ow a lot of MHA and i quite like it. So here is my genderbender fanfic which Sayo Hitsugi.

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What is there to say? The author is a good writer and even though this story is still in its early stages, I think this is going to be my favorite one of his books. So I will give it 10 out of 10 Fire Nation would invade again. With that being said I'll be in the corner rooting for yuri romance. I think Toga or Rumi would be a good choice.

the story itself is very good and I like the fact it doesn't just focus on how much of a bombshell the MC is as the title would sugges, though the grammar could use a bit of work to make it sound more fluid, overall you have a great book here.

to tell you the truth ididnt expect that this one is a yuri it made a little disappointed. i was expecting that in the near future she will have a baby and a husband.

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Well I recommend this story for you who are looking for a good story. This story is one of my favourite and it's good, so try it and I hope you like this story like me

This Novel is well executed. The writing Quality is nice and clean. Updating Stability Until now it is still stable. Story Development is Great, I really enjoyed the story. Character Design is different from the other MHA/BNHA Fanfic And surprisingly very interesting. World Background Although cliches are still good and worth reading. Overall this novel is a 4.8 star and can be readable

please continue with this its amazing

Its a nice story but it doesnt feel like a MHA fanfic. The only characters that appeared are in short cameos that have barely anything to do with the story. And the Mc seems to be having its own adventure completely unrelated, and it doesnt have quirks as its main focus, or heroes and villains. everything that makes mha isnt there,

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mc is 3 years old killing ppl. stronger than even adults with average quirks.. stays that old for basically the entire story so far. i dont get why ppl get hyped readnig about children fighting.

Looks good but was dropped before she even got to ua💀

Bit late to the party but I genuinely enjoyed reading this after having trouble finding stuff that interested me on this app. Stayed up later than I know I should have to finish reading it. Its a shame that its not being updated anymore but it looks like the authors moved on to bigger projects. The overall writing quality is good with some easily fixable mistakes that didnt entirely break the immersion. As I mentioned earlier its not being updated anymore but its still worth a read despite that. I dont have much to say about the story being in the state that its in except good job. I do realize that the mc is technically older than the age of his body but he does come off a bit whiny at times but it can be overlooked with minor consequence. I was actually quite delighted to see that the mc went out of japan and actually did something a bit unheard of being that she might have actually joined the military if the story was alowed to progress past than what is currently out. apparently there was more out beforehand but unfortunately I missed it so I cant really comment on anything past chapter 20(?). I wont try to beg the author to come back to write more and im thankful that he managed to sate some of the current boredom I’ve been suffering from. Be well author and keep up the good work, I’ll be checking out your other works after I check over this review for spelling mistakes that are bound to happen.

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quite pleasant to read. ............................................................................................................................

Hi, author here. This is far from droped and who knows why, but I always loved this one. Out of all my works this one was special for me. I liked it even more than my Dark Souls fic, so I want to give it a end someday.

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I enjoyed how the familly acts like a real familly. They have issues like every family. The author took the freedoms to add on the world and it builds a nice story.

Overall the grammar needs work but my grammar is just as bad. However the author takes the fact that MHA barely talks about outher countries and uses it well. Hope to see more.