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From an objective view, this is a well-written novel with proper pacing and development. Even the writing is fluid with proper transition (a rarity in most webnovel). Similarly, characters are relatively believable and MC has moments of bad decision. As such, I would say that this is a novel I can recommend and give high ratings to. Nonetheless, from a personal point of view, I find myself at crossroads in chapter 8. To be precise, at the concept of preservationists. Not the fault of plot or anything (it is still good), but my own haste(and personal taste). The concept reminded me of a standard 'kindle book'. I was instead expecting a similar direction to first 7 chapters (before the 'great reveal' and 'grand escape'). All in all, it is a great book. I would recommend it to others, though it is not my taste.
*He is not the only one that is from the future* i know that this one thing kills any novel for people so that way you know before you start reading. *Some Spoilers ahead* The MC is transmigrated in to the body of a 9year old boy from the past, not his own body. His situation is not so good because his moms a piece of sh*t and his dad is also a piece of sh*t. I don't know why but he starts to try and help his mother out of the situation even though he hates her for what she has done to him. I would understand if she was a good mother to him but she was not. He makes allot of decisions that makes no sense, he's not a kid. His body is, but his mind is not. So you would think he would make clearer decisions, but he does not. The whole, hes not the only person from the future is something that I don't like, I was okay with there being one other person from the future that he knows. And i was excited to see what both of them will do to change the future for the better. But then you decided to add a f*cking Organization that stops people that are from the future, from changing the timeline. At that point I knew that it was not what I expected from reading the synopsis. As well as knowing that this novel will be filled with people from the future with allot of forced drama. If you like transmigration story's about a male MC and a female MC making quick and rash decisions, while it blows up in there face later. Then them not being able to do what they wanted to do, like change the future for the better. Because theirs a secret organization that wont allow them to, because if they do, they will kill them. Then more then likely weird forced dramatic situations while throwing in more people from the future to stir up more drama. Then this novel is for you. Its not something i like but you may.
This novel had the great potential but unfortunately despite the amazing writing the main character lacks common sense. For example his family situation, they're not his real parents so he can reasonably call the police for the abuse the body he transmigrated to suffered. But no suddenly there is forgiveness and strange compassion for strangers who beat him. That's one separate matter, the other is he doesnt act like his mental age you would think, he makes childish mistakes. Also has unrealistic expectations. Plus the author seems to forget that the mc age is 9, how can he sign papers without a guardian consent. Last thing I was frustrated with is he cannot even handle a little girl's enquiries. He seems threatened, it's bizarre. The writing is incredible but the plot and main character has lots of issues.
This could have been a great story but the author made it garbage.His father almost killed him and his mother, he instead of calling police like a sane person ran away like a bitcch and started telling ppl about future and started placing bets.He knew his father could kill his mother at any time but that **** ran away
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I think this story has a lot of ponteual but personally its not my cup of tea!!! Im not saying its bad but i fell like its moving a little to fast and that theirs a lot of info missing that could have ben more helpful if placed in the right parts! LET ME SAY THIS I WOULD HIGHLY RECOMMENDED TGIS STORY TO FREINDS its just not for me!!! So keep at it i cant wait for the finale results!😤😄👌 Ps. Sorry if some words are misspelled!!!