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From an objective view, this is a well-written novel with proper pacing and development. Even the writing is fluid with proper transition (a rarity in most webnovel). Similarly, characters are relatively believable and MC has moments of bad decision. As such, I would say that this is a novel I can recommend and give high ratings to. Nonetheless, from a personal point of view, I find myself at crossroads in chapter 8. To be precise, at the concept of preservationists. Not the fault of plot or anything (it is still good), but my own haste(and personal taste). The concept reminded me of a standard 'kindle book'. I was instead expecting a similar direction to first 7 chapters (before the 'great reveal' and 'grand escape'). All in all, it is a great book. I would recommend it to others, though it is not my taste.

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I'm Nine Again

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Thanks for your rating! I completely understand where you are coming from. It has taken quite a while for me to introduce plot elements into the story. It's a good learning experience and in future novels I can aim to introduce important elements maybe a bit earlier. Once again, thank younfor the support!