Hunter x Hunter World - Reviewers Rage
A loser famous for his reviews was suddenly standing before a supreme being. His arrogance angered the higher being. His lifelong wishes to be special like the main characters of the stories he obsessed with were granted in return that his feeble efforts entertaining them. Sadly not in the way he wished for. He was ordered to gain strength in any of the worlds he would like, but in exchange, he would fight in a death match against a transcendental being for entertainment. After countless "runs" the supreme beings became bored. They allowed "him" to keep his memories and gave him enough authority to create his system. There wasn't any animosity between "him" and the beings that played with him since he had no memories of his countless lives. He intended to train but to enjoy mostly his life. -Scene from Chapter 1 How am I supposed to fight this guy when I already lost so often before, maybe this time it's gonna be different.... or I will just spend my days not training and living in the world. Sounds good to me. "HAHAHAHAHAHA" His deep voice shook, cracked and almost crumbled the white and seemingly endless void. "YOU TRIED IT! HERE ARE SOME MEMORIES FOR YOU!!" ------------------ The memories flooded in of the Mc's death, comrades, wives and children from countless lives dying before him and in his arms. He only gained the memories of his most torturous moments. The rage he obtain was fire that couldn't be extinguished no matter how much times passed. This is the story of a rageful Mc that had to partially seal 2/3 of his memories. The story of a loser having all the motivation he needs to become stronger. The ever upgrading system went from the most useless system with only an annoying A.I that was copied from the Mc' previous personality. That barely qualifies itsself to be called a system in the beginning with only fight simulator, but becomes the strongest system in all realms. The first system that presents 3 options to select from to grow stronger. The Hero, Villian and Legend path. The Mc could save people he doesn't care about, slaughter whole bloodlines of his enemies, or do both or nothing. This is the typical story of a useless ordinary guy becoming ...the strongest? most evil? most heroic? most rageful? No one knows, but one thing is certain. He is a delusional novel reader. --------------------------------------------------------- What to expect: Mc will enter the Hunter x Hunter World as his first world. The story will only follow canon by Mc participating the Hunter Exam, the rest will be original. I planned that after the Hunter Exam that the Mc will get his system upgrade of hero, villain and legendary path and of course his Nen ability. The first 40 chapters are slow paced because I want to establish the atmosphere of the novel. Mc personality: The Mc is ruthless when he needs to be. He is neither truly good or truly evil. He is the kind that would help an old woman cross the streets, but trick, blackmail or torture people for what he wants. He is not twisted or has a split personality. Most of the time he is indifferent and just numb to his emotions thats why often he wears a mask hiding his real self. You can suggest cool things by commenting. That goes also for everything else like villains, worlds, abilities, names and so on. ----------------------------------------- Rewards: 2 chapters a week 10 power stones -> + 1 Chapter 5 - 5 Star Reviews -> +1 Chapter Every Gift -> +2 - 10 Chapters
Lost Brother
Months passed and Togiri became somewhat well known in the Heaven's Arena and to the locals as a boy with tenacity.
He wasn't only known to be the youngest blacksmith that could become a master blacksmith before turning 30.
That was thanks to his system. Seven's abilities were almost completely sealed. The ones that weren't were almost useless in helping Togiri train.
Togiri trained by doing odd jobs like carrying heavy deliveries and fighting more and more in the Heaven's Arena.
The grown men looked defeated when Togiri carried double their workload. He didn't grow much in height, but he was constantly getting stronger.
[Togiri. Strength: 2.6, Agility: 2.4, Vitality 2.8]
■Review: 2 times stronger than a regular adult, but still 10 times weaker than a 5-year-old Killua■
Special skills:
[Nen D]
[Killing Intent F]
[Beserk F]
"The review also never gets kinder" whispered Togiri.
@Its not like you don't deserve it, you are one asshole@ said Seven while Togiri was stretching.
"Hey, you dumb MO-" Togiri getting annoyed, and just before he yelled at Seven he was interrupted by Fang his closest and only friend.
"Togiri! Please teach me how you covered the knife in Ten when we were eating! Please~" said Fang while begging on his knees looking at Togiri with puppy eyes.
Togiri started teaching Fang in Nen a few months ago. The reason this happened was that Fang copied Togiri's meditation technique to awaken Nen.
He saw that Togiri became multiple times stronger and way faster since he started meditating and somehow he opened the aura nodes in his eyes on his own.
'Nen is very dangerous and since Fang can already see Nen it's better to have someone teach him that being able to protect yourself is also Important.' thought Togiri while warming his body up to train.
"Huff.... Okay. You simply think of the knife as an extension of your body and it's not Ten but Ren" flickered Togiri his finger against Fang's forehead.
"Ow!...Oh? Like this?!" Fang had the hunting knife of his father in an instant covered with Nen and not soon after it disappeared.
"It's harder than it looks, haha" chulked Fang at Togiri both were sweating. Fang was a natural at learning Nen.
'Fang truly is one talented kid. I don't know if he is as talented as Gon or Killua the main protagonists, but he sure is better than me. I guess that's why he opened the aura nodes in his eyes in just a few weeks' thought Togiri to Seven.
@Yeah, it just shows how much of an untalented bastard you are@ said Seven.
A vain almost popped on Togiri's head, 'I don't know how you look, but remember this I can turn you whenever I want into a sword or any weapon I want and BEAT THE LIVING SHIT OUT OF YOU SEVEN!'.
@Sorry, I will never insult you again oh great master!@ said Seven monotonously.
"Hmpf"
"Huh? What's wrong Togiri?"
"Nothing, nothing" giggled Togiri nervously away.
"Anyway Fang, I heard your father talking with your mother and they didn't seem thrilled that you were training and starting to go to the Heaven's Arena with me"
"..."
"It's because..... they think I will end up like my older brother Kastriot."
"You have an older brother? Why didn't you mention him before?" asked Togiri curiously.
"My parents told me this last week and I...."
"My brother was a bright child and was very similar to you. He was hard working and his dream was to become a Hunter. When he was 17 years old and I was 3 when he went to the Hunter exam.
He passed and became a Hunter. A year after he became a Hunter he started acting weird. He started talking about power and the end of the world to my parents and anybody who would listen.
Kastriot said he was the only one able to stop it and that he would do anything necessary. He told my parents about his ability to absorb life force out of Hunters, regular people, and animals."
"What! Wait did he..."
"Yes! He killed so many people that he became the most wanted person in the Hunter Association. He destroyed many cities"
"....." Togiri didn't say anything and just looked expressionless at the floor.
"At first it was fun to train with you, but now I got a reason to become stronger. I want to stop my brother and restore the honor of my family. I will bring justice to the many he killed."
"I know I'm only 8, but it's my duty no matter what anyone says." Fang was as steadfast as a mountain.
'Seven, I always knew this world is fiction and never felt a very deep bond to anyone except Fang, but maybe I should think some things over.'
'I have read countless stories and this story is also not that uncommon but for it to happen to my best friend that I know since I traveled over into this world feels unreal.'
@What do you want to do master?@
'I will help Fang and we together will become stronger!' thought Togiri to Seven while standing up and clenching his fist.
"Come on Fang! Let's train before we go to sleep!" said Togiri excitedly smiling and getting into his battle stance.
"Haha, bring it on!" Fang also got into his battle stance which was identical to Togiris, but a bit more sloppy.
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