bella_melodia
I really like the idea of the plot, it's interesting and different to most books on Webnovel. The writing quality is quite good, the two main characters are very dynamic together - a king and a queen that both had a bad past and didn't choose their role as a leader but manage to make it work. The paragraphs may be a bit long at times, I'd advise the author to pay more attention to it. Overall I recommend this book! :)
The story has potential. It has an interesting premise. It flows nicely, well-written, and the story is progressing well. The only problem I think is that the wall of paragraph in the beginning. Don't worry, it will lessen... a bit. It might put off others with the chunk of text while others will enjoy the story despite the format. Goodluck to the author!
After reading I can relate the title with the story. I thought that I might lose interest but nothing like this happened and I kept reading. I liked it, though there are some mistakes like switching between past and present yet it does not make reading and understanding harder. All in all, keep writing[img=recommend]
The overall concept was really captivating and I would honestly love to read more stories where love relations and smut are not the central element. The characters do feel psychologically believable, like when the author describes the trauma of loneliness and rootlessness. I really like the way the author views the human mind. This story is worth reading, even though there are some points where you just feel so sorry for the characters lol
Very great start! The descriptions are really well-written and detailed for the readers to understand! The only thing that I'd like to point out is the writing style. There are tenses mixed up with each other (especially on the first few chapters), passive voice misuse (such as "was walking" to "walked" and others) Besides that, kudos for the author!
I never thought that I will ever read a story of medieval period and I was never even interested in history, but I have to say WOW!!!!!! The author did an amazing job to create the story. The description of the world, characterization and plot everything is awesome. I wrote too much but it was worth reading.
Okay!! When I began reading, I couldn't drop the book till I got to Chap 5 and I had to sleep. It is such an interesting tale...showing the purity of the author's heart. I can feel the author's simplicity through this work and it makes me smile. I will just say that probably, English isn't the author's first language. Other than that, I like the plot! Keep it up!
Good job author. ....................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................