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I have read until chapter 8 and I have only a critique on grammar and expression. There are some noticeable grammar mistakes that others pointed out so I won't mention them anymore, but I have to say it is sometimes confusing who is talking at the moment. Overall, it is a cute story, I would recommend anyone who loves romance to give it a try.
Great writing style, The world background was greatly detailed. Story development was also noticeable and the character design was simply detailed and great. If you ask me, then I'd say, it's a heartwarming story that'll melt your heart down. It is worth reading. So Give it a try! ❛ ᴗ ❛ I also admire the writer very much.
totally into it. Love the way you write author. Eventhough I had read novels in this genre I didn't got that much interest and I only used to read other genres. But you have done a good work. Even though I am still in chap 7 I qwould like to tell you that, author you are the best. Keep going. lots of love from me[img=update][img=update][img=update]
This story is a sweet heartwarming second chance romance. Interesting characters. I love the friendship between the ML and his friends. The romance between the ML and the FL is super cute. I can't wait to see how the FL will seduce ML into having another relationship with her. looking forward to reading more chapters. Good job keep it up author.