I have read until chapter 8 and I have only a critique on grammar and expression. There are some noticeable grammar mistakes that others pointed out so I won't mention them anymore, but I have to say it is sometimes confusing who is talking at the moment. Overall, it is a cute story, I would recommend anyone who loves romance to give it a try.
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