comfortseavey
That's what is called a mysterious plot accommodating many mysteries inside it. Writer made the reader be thrilled into the suspense created by the work, and crave to read more. I think you got some real skills- and it wouldn't be long you get a name in this genre. Good luck buddyđ keep smiling... KEEP WRITING!
4-5 chapters but everything you've captured merely in these is aamazinggg, I see the bond between your characters and you've done a good job providing details in depth about the after-effects of tragic incidents such as this, there's also a social stigma that is constantly being battled though, I love it.
Chapters out as of review: 1 Writing Quality: It could use a little more proofreading. I can still read it, but if you run it through a grammar tool it can flow much better. 3 Stability of updates: 1 chapter so I will give it 4 Story Development: It's 13 Reasons why: 4 Character Design: Characters are a lot more spicy than 13 Reasons why, and that's a good thing: 5 World Background: 5 World Background