Review Detail of takunithecat in Her Friends

Chapters out as of review: 1 Writing Quality: It could use a little more proofreading. I can still read it, but if you run it through a grammar tool it can flow much better. 3 Stability of updates: 1 chapter so I will give it 4 Story Development: It's 13 Reasons why: 4 Character Design: Characters are a lot more spicy than 13 Reasons why, and that's a good thing: 5 World Background: 5 World Background