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HARRY POTTER FANFIC

Hai guys it is my first time writing a novel so there will be so many grammatical mistakes so please do point it out for me and if there are any suggestions pls do mention them Two different people got a wish from R.O.B and they both are reincarcerated as cousins(boy/girl) in a muggle born with a soul connection and they both can use each other wishes. the whole story will be where MC will be mostly OP try reading it once and give me advise on how to develop the characters and how to be the dialogue writing. THANK YOU PLS ENJOY

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Robbing in Gringotts

We both are very interested to see how they are going to rob

after some time we got news from sister Yang as she entered the leaky cloudron,

immediately I and Aditi shifted our perspective to her,

As soon as she entered she looked at the bartender Tom and went towards him slowly Edward didn't like this place at all he is irritated very much

"Finish this fast " Edward said in a little bit irritated tone

Yang Xin didn't reply to him, after seeing the way to enter Diagon alley in Toms mind she went near the wall and took the transformed stick that looked like a wand and tapped it in three places and it opened the way to the entrance

Aditya [seeing in the movie and seeing in real life is different ]

Aditi [ hmm ]

Yang Xin [ when you come personally you will like it more master ]

Aditya [ I think so too ]

After taking with me, she didn't reply she directly entered the Gringotts. Edward was standing outside reading the Gringotts bank description

Yang Xin [ don't waste time with that come with me ]

After saying that she went near a goblin and looked him in his eyes and controlled him to get the information she needed

" Go and call the manager of private noble vaults " that goblin slowly got up from his seat and went to call a noble house manager

When the manager came Yang Xin immediately controlled him with eye contact.

" Dear guest please come with me to a private room " goblin respectively bowed and requested they three went into a private room. after entering Yang Xin immediately ordered him

" Open a vault in name ouroboros, and add money which you usually rob from the noble families, keep Ouroboros account in your hand and keep it records neatly ok and don't tell anyone regarding us, now go and bring a vault key and money pouch connecting the vaults "

Aditya [ ok, What happened, It happened really simple right ]

Yang Xin [ hee hee no young master his mind defense is really tough, I don't think there will be that many people who can control him just by looking in his eyes, and wands are usually not used openly and near the vaults space it locked so no one can Apparate inside the bank, and security measure are also really very good ]

Aditya [ I know sister is great ]

Yang Xin [ young master praise me more hee hee ]

Aditi [ can you stop flirting please, I am getting vomiting here listening to both of you ]

Aditya [ don't listen to her sister Yang she is jealous because no one is flirting with her ]

Aditi just rolled her eyes at me

After some time the goblin came back

"I have opened an account under ouroboros and kept myself as its manager, these are its key and money pouch it contains 100,000 gallons," he said as he handed her a key and a pouch

Yang Xin and Edward left there immediately, they entered Diagon alley and they searched for a rundown shop

they both came to the corner and they saw a rundown place. Even though it is at an edge but the place is good

"Edward can you use this place to remodel and build a shop, " I asked him to know for sure so he can use that place

" yes young master, It will take some time but it is ok, we can remodel this place from scratch and build as we wish accordingly "

" Good now Yang Xin go to st mungo's hospital and check the long bottoms and see if you can fix them, Edward try to find out Who place is this under and where they are and buy this place from them, keep proper documents of them ok,"

After taking orders from me Yang Xin left to hospital and Edward went to near shops to ask how to buy that place

Aditi and I continued our class in the afternoon we saw sister Yang Xin sitting in Longbottom's family ward

she told the nurse to give a call to Augusta Longbottom and arrange for a meeting

Later after some time the nurse came back and told that she is coming, normally it would take some time due to problems with communication, but the nurse told that today Augusta is coming as usual visit with her grandson

After 2 hours the Augusta entered the ward and was surprised to see someone else in the ward

"May I know Who you are " She wants to know If the other person is some doctor or some random person

"Mrs. Longbottom, My name is Yang Xin, I have a deal for you hope we can cooperate," yang Xin asked politely but she didn't get up from the chair or showed any etiquette to her

Augusta is confused for a second, and the Neville behind her went near to his parent and near them

"What is the deal " Augusta wants to know, Why she is here and she is a bit angry ad Yang Xin didn't show any proper respect for her

" I will cure your son and in-law here in return Longbottom family has to swear an alliance to us "Yang Xin replied simply

As soon as the words are said both Neville and his grandmother stared at Yang Xin for some time