Reviews of Harry Potter and the Rise of the Protector
Harry Potter and the Rise of the Protector
Alexander_the_grey
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a well thought out and we'll executed fanfic. the story is about 30 - 45% canon and the rest is original. a good MC that, although helps others, is still not naiv and can deal with threats. excellent grammar as well as spelling. side characters are OC and has personal development as well as play a good role of the book, but not so much it outshines the MC. Ps. nice romance as well, not rushed but not prolonged, and got built up well.
i dont know whats going on this is definately a copy of the muggleborn conspiracy. the author doesn't even hide it. Author of this Novel:Alexander_the_grey and MC of Muggleborn Conspiracy:Alexander Grey. Thats not to say there are no differences between the novels its just not enough to count as a seperate one. This feels more like a rewrite with slight alterations.
A properly done Harry Potter Fanfic. It’s an amazing read and I highly suggest reading it if interested in the slightest bit. Nothing to complain about at all, except that he doesn’t give Sol enough time within the book or showcase him enough even in private which I would enjoy. Overall it’s amazing.
This fanfiction feels extremely familiar to a fiction I've read before. Not exactly the same but it uses a lot of stuff from other works I've previously read. The Magical Core concept of cores being "leveled up" in the same manner as the states of matter "gas to liquid to solid" I've read before elsewhere. The concept of "MC is a kid so hires some downtrodden people and uses wealth acquired to form an organization that leads muggleborns and maybe magical races is also pretty much ripped from that previous work. I just wish I remembered the name of that other fiction. Anyways I'm not sure if this guy jus ripped off that previous work I mentioned or he is the author of the work I previously read and just re-wrote the whole thing. It just feels like this is too much of a copy of something I've already read.
Writing Quality - 3 Stars Story Development -2 Stars Character Design -1 Star Updating Stability -3 Stars World Background -1Star Writing Quality [ not much to say here, Prove reading is not a thing here, and yeah, not bad otherwise ] Story Development [ I don't see the Mc getting more mature and it has some Chinese feeling in it but I doubt that the author is Chinese. ] Character Design [ Well, the Mc is just pathetic, and having secrets is not existing here. I mean, Why tell his friends everything about him and Giving people he just met and threatened his bank acc where they can get money from is also not intelligent! The Mc is also hyper cringe and a hypocrite. To his friends, I have some things I also don't tell my friends and they are a lot less important than those things in the Story. I mean, we are in a world where people can read minds so....keeping secrets even from friends is important! etc etc ] Etc Erc, I am too lazy again, like always **: English isn't my mother language so don't blame me!
Your typical power fantasy Gary Su kind of story. The main character is popular, good-looking, talented, kind, and every other possible good trait one can possibly be. His only hardship was the one year of torture he endured which literally did nothing to affect his personality, and after that, he's basically given a smooth ride through life with no conflict whatsoever. The idea behind the story has potential, but the almost stagnant development behind the world and main character make it borderline unpleasant to read.
There are so many problems in this story that I don't know from where to begin. This can't be called a story. Its just a wish fulfilment. First, he is angry with dumbledore about not getting his kidnappers death due to his meddling. He even become his friend. And that 5th year being a head boy... it was just ridiculous. Him apolozing to everybody, even ron when he didn't do anything wrong as they were the ones who started it. You gave mercy to luscious just to save canon. You knew dumbledore let harry be abused and your reaction was okay. I will just heal the damage. And most of all, he acted all smiles in front of harry and told him to "tough" it out when marge came instead of helping him. These are just I remember. There are at least triple of what I don't remember.
